"Can I" a Hook original

[Hook]

I'm all caught up with my collaborations so now I'll finish (and probably start) a few of my own pieces.  I played 2 different drum tracks and used parts of each in different sections and the big fill at the end is both of them . I'm back on the DP 008 now using the line6 pocket pod & the zoom ps02 for the 2 extra vocal parts. The lead vocal was my MXL990 condenser.
1 crazy distorted uke (stereo)
1 bass
2 drums (stereo)
1 lead vocal
1 back ground vocal
1 crazy delay vocal

Can I

written & performed by Hook

I don't want to be left out of all the fun
I don't want to be the only one unsure which way to run

Do I need to raise my hand
Or can I just speak my mind
Can I

I'm not sure why you think it's okay to talk to us that way
I'm not sure why you would choose those particular things to say

Do I need to hold your hand
Or can I move about freely
Can I

I've never been more sure or ever felt so strong
And I've never been more right even though the world says I'm wrong

Do I need to be restrained
Can I

[Mike_S]

Full marks for originality... your vocal sounds great, like a cross between Frank Zappa and Lou Reed to me. Great performance and a lovely little journey your track takes us on.

[allysonmarie]

Awesome work you did in putting together that beat, Hook It was very unique to me and I was really drawn in. And I loved the strength in your vocals that you ended the track with.

[Geir]

This is crazy good !!

Love that machine gun ukulele !!!

Great vocals and man those drums are fab !! and the bass !!

WOW !!!!

[chapperz66]

Agree with Geir.  This is crazy good.

[cuthbert]

Dude, you've been cranking them out lately!

Crazy goodness on those effects and the drumming & strumming, and the vocal mic sounds very natural. Pyrotechnic!

[bruno]

You are on fire brother.
Super cool and original sounds and progression.
Love the use of effects on this - brilliant
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[Jarle]

Yes this is crazy good. The distorted uke is awesome. I love the part near the end with all the stops. I'm a fan.

[Redler]

That's creativity to use "machine gun ukulele". Captivating song, love it!

[SwanSong]

Another marvelous Hook creation. u r one creative
and talented musician .congrats keep sharing NEIL.!