i felt it : Deific Dave and Oldrottenhead

[Oldrottenhead]

was playing catch up on the latest song player when i heard this. https://songcrafters.org/community/index.php?topic=21398.0 have hardly had time to do much music lately. so was nice to find this whilst i had a spare hour.

bold strokes
against the canvas
subtle shades
cerebral
i felt it
touching me
i felt it
move me
communicating
to me
we are talking
with no words
relying on
just body language
i felt it
touching me
i felt it
move me
communicating
to me

i felt it

music
written and played
by
deific dave
lyrics
written and sung
by oldrottenhead

[Johnbee]

I still maintain that this piece didn't need anything other than the fine solo guitar work, but the addition of ORH's vocal work was a nice enhancement.  Great job!  Nice collab!

JB 

[Redler]

When listening to Dave's instrumental version yesterday, I thought that your lyric/vocals would fit well on it (because you've done superb work on my acoustic songs). Very serene and beautiful, Dave and James!

[cuthbert]

Very nice. The addition of vocals somehow imparts the guitar with more of a Latin flavor, to my ears. These two parts work very well together.

James, I may send some music your way...

[DeificDave]

When you hit the "I felt it" line the hairs stood up on the back of my neck! You captured the moment for sure here! I love those lyrics too, your voice is charged with emotion. Thanks for doing this, I'm impressed with your creativity, I love the subtle vocal after the diminished chord and the high note to end is awesome.

[Hook]

This is stunningly serene & masterful. I love that track Dave, when you pop up I know I'm in for a treat & ORH, what a perfect lyric. You reached into that track and like talked to it & got to know it &  what it really wanted to say, brilliant brother!!!
Rock On!

[kenny mac]

Ooh this is good .
Hats off to you jim,I couldn't find my way into this song.
You've done Dave proud.
Daves guitar on this is haunting as well,
Class.

[Oldrottenhead]

Ooh this is good .
Hats off to you jim,I couldn't find my way into this song.
You've done Dave proud.
Daves guitar on this is haunting as well,
Class.

the three of us will need to get together sometime.

[kenny mac]

I know I keep saying it but we will get it sorted at some point,it's all really down to each other's availability.

[Jarle]

This was beautiful as an instrumental, but your vocal has added a new dimension.