Color Fades

Greeny · June 17, 2014, 03:59:30 AM

No need for drums. This is a killer track. Beautiful chords, melodies and structure - you've excelled yourself here! "How can I dream in color without you?"... peach of a lyric and a belter of a chorus. It's one of those songs that could be done in a 1000 different ways, but the songwriting would always shine through. Wonderful.

averiguar · June 17, 2014, 04:22:30 AM

I felt the vocal was too prominent. It seemed nakedly raw to me. Not that your vocal is BAD, just that it feels too overpowering over the rest of the sound.

SwanSong · June 17, 2014, 11:51:55 AM

HI T.c there r times that one can spend to much time on a song
but yet this works superbly without drums. and sometimes best
to leave as is ...and perhaps meant to b this way. great vocals.
and lyrics. and smooth guitar work ; cheers NEIL.!

Jarle · June 18, 2014, 02:31:11 AM

I like this a lot. No need for drums in this arrangement. I would have liked some backing vocal at the chorus tho, - and what a chorus. This is really good song writing.