Walk With Me

Started by Nelson, June 07, 2014, 08:51:46 PM

Nelson



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When folks ask me what kind of music I play I often respond, Somadis and Somadat.

Well, here's...... Somadat. :) :)

If I can get hold of a nice choir, I could really blow this out...
but until then, you stuck with me.   ;D ;D


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Walk With Me
spoken:"We gonna take this one back to church and dedicate it to my dear mother.
Any good that comes from me, she planted the seed. Believe it."

Verse
When, your solitary prayers just won't do.
And the weight of the world's coming down on you.
When your troubles are many and your friends are few.
Brothers and sisters you're welcomed to...

Chorus
Walk with me... on every street of every town.
Walk with me... just lay your burdens down.
Walk with me... Don't know how far it's gonna be...
Or where it's gonna lead...Just walk with me?

Verse
A child wanders alone in the street, eyes of pain and disbelief.
Nowhere to go and no relief; she lost her whole family.
As I witness the horror unfold, something stirs, deep in my soul.
And devastation and pain's in every face I see.
No I won't sit idly by, I want to help but don't know how.
Reach for the sky and shout out loud... won't you Please

Chorus
Walk with me... on every street of every town.
Walk with me... just lay your burdens down.
Walk with me... Don't know how far it's gonna be...
Or where it's gonna lead... just walk with me?

Bridge
Yeah, times are tough, but we'll survive. The path is rough but we'll get by.
We're strong enough, to sure the line... hand in hand... side by side.
For as long as we've been under the sun, the power of peace has outlast the gun.
If we have the will, then our will be done, it's a powerful thing, when we walk as one.
I'm not promising salvation or to your problems, the key.
But fellowship can be powerful, so just, walk with me.
With hate on the rise, smoke filled skies,
Glaring at each other through suspicious eyes.
Instead of my life, take hand... and just.

Chorus
Walk with me... on every street of every town.
Walk with me... just lay your burdens down.
Walk with me... Don't know how far it's gonna be...
Or where it's gonna lead... just walk with me?
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Tangled Wires

I got lulled by the mellow opening verse, and then bang that chorus kicks in and changes the mood and tempo of the song completely.

Great song Nelson, those choruses and bridges just want to make you get up and dance and the verses provide a real cool contrast to these.

A choir in the choruses would certainly add something extra special to already special song.

I like Somadat a lot!


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Oldrottenhead

i watched a documentary about bill withers on bbc4 on friday night, (what a proud passionate man he is). i immediately thought of you, nelson you are out of the same mould as mr withers. brilliant song and your voice is incredible.
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kenny mac

Nice song there.
I would love to hear a slowed down version of it,it has definitely got a great vibe to it.
A choir would be great.
Well done.
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Fine songwriting and performing! Loved the drum arrangement - works well!! Brilliant lyric, too!
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cuthbert

Wow!!! Mind officially blown...  :o 8)

Tons of energy in this, Nelson - love the strong gospel feel in the chorus, which also happens to be catchy as hell! I'm also in awe of the piano basis of the song - deep respect for playing so well. Fantastic vocals, too - you're really opening up on this one.

One of your best, I think.
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Jarle

This is brilliant songwriting, the tempo changes works really well. I agree a choir would be great.
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T.C. Elliott

I love the sound of that piano. How'd you get it? But of course, as always, the highlight is your vocal.  There is a character in your voice that just can't be replicated, can't be auto-tuned, can't be taught I don't think.
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Bluesberry

So good Mr.Nelson......so good.....bloody good...yeah love the chorus.....so good.

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Hook

I probably shouldn't curse in church but sir you are a badass! This is excellent songwriting & your delvey is awesome!
Rock On!

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Because the Hook brings you back
I ain't tellin' you no lie
The hook brings you back
On that you can rely