My Broken Mind

[Hook]

Very cool tune, I also really like the chorus, well done!
Rock On!

[T.C. Elliott]

Ya'll are too nice. Thanks for all the comments.

[Farrell Jackson]

Great T.C.! This could be a long lost Neil Young song...it's that good! As others have said the contrast between the over driven electric and the acoustic guitar makes an unexpected but great production idea.

Farrell

[Nelson]

From the intro the music grabs you, accompanied by a wonderful vocal performance,
drawing you into the song.

That's what we all hope our work does.

PS.
The music has a spirited punch, led by the cool guitar work.

Well done

[SE]

Really enjoyed the song and performance, just lots to like, the lyrics are cool and the vox are magic, only thing IMO which means very little. I would keep the grungy guitar, but tone it down a little and increase the bass during the vox, cause that is the standout part of the track, really like this song loads.

[Oldrottenhead]

playing catch up again, busy busy busy, finding some gems today, this one included.

[Blooby]

Love the interplay between the grungy electric and the clean, sweet acoustic. Has a touch of the Neil Youngs about the riff-style and vocal, but it's a top quality song with a really slick delivery. The build to the big, catchy chorus is perfect. Very cool indeed.

This pretty much summed up what I had to say. I, too, was caught by the contrast of the acoustic and electric.

Blooby

[Bluesberry]

I like this.............really like this..........I am just getting to the acoustic solo part, yeah, thats perfect.......this one is ready for prime time.

[allysonmarie]

Fantastic track I'm in love with the music-- that rhythm and the melody work beautifully.


I walk to the door, it's open wide
I try to see the world from here
The lonely echoes from my past life
Can't lure me out from my fear

I can see myself in this way very often in the past and even now still at times. Very nice work with your lyrics.

[taffsdad]

wow brilliant song my friend...like Alyson I feel the words......don't do any of that remixing this is the business, it has a rawness a real feel for the situation......