Surrendered

[allysonmarie]

This is an older song I just wanted to share. Thanks to Hook, I will hopefully have much needed improvement with my recording sound quality to share with using better made equipment. Time to figure everything out has been slim lately, but soon should allow enough free time.

To you I've given up. I've given in
Though I promised this could never ever hurt me enough
To you I've given up.

Somewhere beyond hopeless doubt and fear I've run
But you know me, round and round we go
For every break through- high and low-
You've chosen to follow

I don't want to be wanted this way.
I settle – I ache – I satisfy all that you crave
You claim my life...the very breath of my blood,
And I've forgotten who I was before you, before your love

Before everything I've done,
Everything I've become

[Redler]

Very moving lyrics and impressive singing!

Which recording gear are you using on your recordings?

[Tangled Wires]

Wow, what a stunner, I love your voice, so expressive and powerful!!! It kind of reminds me a bit of Evanescene.

Beautiful piano playing, I like the slight pauses which create a nice tension throughout.

For me the quality of the song is more important than the quality of the recording, but I would love to hear an updated version with your new recording equipment as it would add that extra shine to it.

Wonderful song!

[SwanSong]

WOW  a stunning song. great delivery of vocal.s u have used
great modulation and breath control beside presence . song is
well constructed.. love your poetry and how beautiful lyrics
are set to music . wish u the best thanks for sharing NEIL.!!

[Hilary]

Oh I love everything about this song - the lyrics, the melody and, of course, the way you perform it.

[Geir]

Another great performance of a great song Allyson.

I really look forward to hearing what you can produce when you get better recording gear !

[Hook]

Really beautiful performance of a very good song!
Rock On!

[T.C. Elliott]

I agree with all the comments about the expressive nature of your vocal performance. You've got an interesting and likeable tone to your voice and I like how you use it.

[Jarle]

Another great song from you. I really look forward to hear what you can produce with your new equipment.

[allysonmarie]

It means very much you guys could take time and listen. Thank you very much for your comments. I've recently gotten some unfortunate news and may not be working on anything new as soon as I'd hoped, but I really appreciate your encouragement.