Love Is All - Nick / odh original

[ODH]

Love is All

w/m Nick Morgan

No aps were harmed in the making of this song.

I can't figure out if I need to put an additional vocal part into this song.  There are stretches which seem like they could take a vocal, but I can't get anything which fits.  Then I listen again and like it the way it is.
 
Oh, I don't know, I'm confused, I am.

Also I've no idea if the SoundCloud player will work.  I hate SoundCloud.

http://soundcloud.com/one-divine-hammer/love-is-all

[Hilary]

I think it sounds great, especially with headphones (and the player's working fine) but I think it definitely needs something else. I could hear like a chant (love, love, love is all, love is all you need hey hey hey hey) and some oooohs (I'd layer them up with harmonies, but that's me). You could counterpoint it too maybe - IMO

[ODH]

I could hear like a chant (love, love, love is all, love is all you need hey hey hey hey) and some oooohs (I'd layer them up with harmonies, but that's me). You could counterpoint it too maybe - IMO

That's interesting.  I did have a chant which I toyed with "this-is-important-to-me" starting on the second beat under the "Love is all" and repeated ad nauseum; it was then going to turn into the first line of the verse / white-boy-rap through the middle part.  Didn't really get off the ground, or hasn't yet at least.

Thanks for the feedback.

[Hilary]

I could hear like a chant (love, love, love is all, love is all you need hey hey hey hey) and some oooohs (I'd layer them up with harmonies, but that's me). You could counterpoint it too maybe - IMO

That's interesting.  I did have a chant which I toyed with "this-is-important-to-me" starting on the second beat under the "Love is all" and repeated ad nauseum; it was then going to turn into the first line of the verse / white-boy-rap through the middle part.  Didn't really get off the ground, or hasn't yet at least.

Thanks for the feedback.

oh yeah a rap sounds good!