all i can say

[beatnikbiker]

song about a guy i knew who worked himself into an early grave at 43 yrs ld

[Flash Harry]

shit yeah.

Right on the button.

And there are those who's body just gives up on them. Right tone. Melancholy.

[Greeny]

Nice melancholy mood and atmosphere that's come at a poignant time for some of us on here. The songwriting is really solid, and that lead tone is really sweet and soulful.

With the rhythm track, you can replace the count-in pattern with the 'break' one. And the vocals were peaking a bit. Is this on the MBR? 'Onboard1' is a good general-purpose patch if you're using the MBR onboard mic for the vox.

Good stuff.

[Gnasty]

Agree with Greeny on the clipped vocals but this is a really cool tune. I like it a lot! Especially the
guitar bend fills. Fits perfectly. Awesome tune! Sorry about your friend.

[Johnny Robbo]

A great melancholy vibe & I quite like the somewhat lo-fi feel to this - it adds to the atmosphere of the song

[Redler]

Great songwriting and performing! The lead guitar additions works well!

[Jarle]

Great melancholy song. I really like the lead guitar fills.