The Way You Are - Trev

[trev]

Hello chaps havnt been on for quite a while but here goes

[Michael McIntyre]

This is some really fine songwriting.  Performance-wise, it's good too, but the "me" at the end of some of the verses is so soft that it's a little hard to hear (the first time I listened, I didn't hear it, and it's kind of the pay-off).  So if you ever come back to this, that's something I'd probably work on.  I enjoyed the song.  Thanks for sharing it!

[IanR]

Nice work Trev.  I thought I heard some Police lyrics in there? - Every step you take?

You have put this together beautifully and it suits your voice perfectly.

cheers,

Ian

[trev]

Thanks chaps and yes I totally agree with you about the levels Michael its kind of just a work in progress at the moment as its a song hopefully destined for somebody else appreciate your comments guys