Grab me again (Portuguese)

[xicpanad]

Hi!
Another one I just finished. I´m not done though with the voice yet, seems a bit "muddy" to me, and it´s just because the way I hold the MicroBr while I was recording. I´ll change it soon but this is version might be good enough to post it for now.

Feel free to coment...

Cheers

[Hilary]

I'd be interested to here how you think you can improve this - it sounds great! A lovely song and a pleasure to listen to in Portuguese, thanks.

[Picker]

Really nice tune.  Very clear, your voice is not muddy at all.  I love the rasp you have in your voice too, it's very soulful.

[Redler]

Really melodic pop song and well produced! Muddy voice? No at all!! The piano sounds so great!

[xicpanad]

Yeah maybe my sound system is the problem. In my headphones everything looks better, but in my LG surround system, looks a bit more muddy. Anyway, these home systems always change the sound to produce a "better" cinema experience, so I shouldn´t really trust that.

Cheers

[Geir]

Great tune xicpanad and an excellent performance !!

The production sounds good, but the voice would probably stand out better if you'd use a panned (stereo) delay instead of a mono. You could also try to pan the electric guitar away from the centre leaving more room for your voice. In my headphones the piano sounds a bit panned to the left so panning the guitar to the right would probably be the best imho.

 

[Hook]

Excellent song, beautiful in fact. I agree with Geir, a little panning can often get rid of that muddy sound, it's not the vocal track cause that awesome! Great listen!
Rock On!

[Oldrottenhead]

what a great song, i didn't understand a word but it has a great feel. bravo!

[xicpanad]

Thanks Geir. It seems to be a great advice, I always welcome tips on mixing and mastering. It´s a tricky science.

[Jarle]

Nice song, the piano sounds great and I like your voice.