Hook and line - NEW VERSION

[funkyaxe]

An original tune by Bob ( firesidefox ) and myself. Bob wrote the tune and plays all instruments and I wrote the lyrics and sang the song.

Hope you enjoy. THIS IS THE NEW VERSION

Andy ( fynkyaxe )

Here's the lyrics in case you cant decipher what I'm singing, LOL

Hook and line

Running through my mind
Well you tend to do sometimes
Overwhelming my head with crazy memories
Dragging me down with trivialities
You wont go away, cant keep you at bay

Chorus:
You got me yeah, trapped in time
You got me yeah, hook and line

Break

So many years have passed
Thought I was rid of you at last
Then I hear a song, a voice, see a face
Takes me back to a distant place

I truly hope you're happy now
And found your slot in life somehow
We had our time, then it was gone
Didn't know the rules, we just played along
But if I only knew, what you'd put me through

Chorus:
You got me yeah, trapped in time
You had me yeah, hook and line

End

[The Gobi Desert Canoe Club]

Hi Andy, a pretty little song but it comes out a little boomy on my system. Might be of value to have a listen from your end, it would be a great shame to let such a nice song go.  Roscoe

[Hilary]

Lots of thoughts on this one, random as always.

Yay you're singing and it's a lovely, lovely song.
Yay you've got a friend called Firesidefox (I love that) and boy can he play. Is he a songcrafter? Is that his name on another forum? Am I being too nosey?

Roscoe is right about the mix - sounds a bit hot, or maybe too much fx on the vox but I'm no expert on such matters.

Cool  - I look forward to hearing more from you two.

[fenderbender]

 
Ahhh wont play for me
sorry will get back later

[funkyaxe]

Thanks fenderbender, Hilary and Roscoe for listening. I agree that the mix is boomy. Funnily enough it didnt sound that way through my headphones but it sounds awful through speakers ( I should have checked that before posting, sorry ). I will endeavour to sort it out and repost asap.

In reply to Hilary, yes the person firesidefox is a man called Bob who I met on a website called Maketunes. He is a very talented musician and we have collaborated on a few tunes already.
Thanks for your comments on the song and no you are not being to nosey. LOL

Andy ( funkyaxe )

[Jarle]

I really like the verses in this song. The lovely fingerpicking on the guitar together with your voice sounds really beautiful.

[funkyaxe]

Ive reposted this tune as thr first version was very boomy. Hopefully this should now be better.
Details as before..........

An original tune by Bob ( firesidefox ) and myself. Bob wrote the tune and plays all instruments and I wrote the lyrics and sang the song.

Hope you enjoy.

Andy ( fynkyaxe )

Here's the lyrics in case you cant decipher what I'm singing, LOL

Hook and line

Running through my mind
Well you tend to do sometimes
Overwhelming my head with crazy memories
Dragging me down with trivialities
You wont go away, cant keep you at bay

Chorus:
You got me yeah, trapped in time
You got me yeah, hook and line

Break

So many years have passed
Thought I was rid of you at last
Then I hear a song, a voice, see a face
Takes me back to a distant place

I truly hope you're happy now
And found your slot in life somehow
We had our time, then it was gone
Didn't know the rules, we just played along
But if I only knew, what you'd put me through

Chorus:
You got me yeah, trapped in time
You had me yeah, hook and line

End

Andy ( funkyaxe )

[funkyaxe]

Have posted this again - please see my song list. Hopefully it is better now.This is the new version - it was kindly merged into original post - thankyou.

Andy ( funkyaxe )

[Geir]

Very nice song indeed !

[Hilary]

hmmmm even better