I won't be holding you tonight

Started by The Gobi Desert Canoe Club, November 14, 2013, 09:21:31 AM

I won't be holding you tonight
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Hot off the press. Hope you enjoy. Roscoe

When words won't come
And you sit there staring at each other
She turns away
And says I love another
She said, you can beg all you want
But I won't be holding you, I won't be holding you tonight.

When tears won't come
And you're staring at the wall
You tried and tried
You gave it your all
She said, you can beg all you want
But I won't be holding you, I won't be holding you tonight.

All things must end, I know it's true
But I didn't see the end with you

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She said, you can beg all you want
But I won't be holding you, I won't be holding you tonight.

When breath won't come
And you're gasping for air
You breathed your life into me
When you were there
She said, you can beg all you want
But I won't be holding you, I won't be holding you
I won't be holding you, I won't be holding you tonight.

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bruno

Very nice track Roscoe - although the harmoniser (I assume) is a little to up-front for me. There are some strange artefacts going on that make it sound a little artificial (not you, but the unit). To be honest, I've used the one on the BR1600, and never was really satisfied with the results - its probably just me. I enjoyed the song - a very nice bit of songwriting.
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Hook

Excellent songwriting brother, I'm on computer speakers & the harmonies sounded fine to me but Brunos ears are way better than mine. I always dig your style though man & really enjoyed this listen!
Rock On!

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bazz-t-bass

Hi Roscoe............Great song and good recording  ;)(tho I do also just get the harmoniser{or something} kicking in).

Not enough to worry about though :D
Bazz

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WHAT IF? the hokey cokey is really what it's all about????

AndyR

Nice one.

I'm on a second listen cos I didn't hear this harmoniser issue first time round (was typing an email at the same time).

And, actually (I'm on the cheap speakers at the moment), I still can't hear anything that makes me pause while listening! :D

(Note, though, I have been listening to submixes on something I'm working on... in headphones, rather loud... so ears are probably a bit fatigued!!)

Anyway, cool song... like it :)
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Redler

Very laid back as often by you! Lead guitar licks are awesome! Enjoyable listening!
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