Self Improvement

[antisocialworker]

heres a new one i wrote
its called self improvement
im not much of a singer but i tried here
Any ideas to make it better???
maybe having someone else sing it?
all comments welcome

[Pedro]

Hey I like this one!

The song is pretty cool, I like the chorus backing vocals. It reminds me of Pixies! The recording is pretty nice too. Your vocals aren't too bad, although you look like you are making great effort to reach the highs. To make it better I would just advise you to keep praticing it, sing it more often, play it more often. It's a pretty cool song.

For the vocals what microphone are you using?

[antisocialworker]

Thanks for your imput
im just using the built in microphone

[Oldrottenhead]

cool song, reminds me of the pixies too.

[lg]

This is a cool song and your vox is Awesome Here!!!
The lyrics are something that most of us can relate to
at one time or another in our lives, I believe....
This  went straight to my mp3 player!

LG

[SE]

Cool tune nice guitar and vox enjoyed it very much.

[antisocialworker]

Thank you for your comments! I enjoy hearing any feedback, its re-assuring, and gives me more confidence in my music.

[Gritter]

Cool tune with a great chorus!

[mike]

Yep - pixies feel.  Can't go wrong with that.
I think your vocals sound fine and I also like the prominence of the bass line.

Mike

[Vanncad]

Another great song AWS! I've never heard the Pixies, but I guess I'm gonna have to check them out if they sound like this.

You've got a lot of emotion in your vocal. You do sound like you are struggling to reach the highs - but that's okay. It adds to the feeling of the song.

Keep working on it man. You've got some serious talent bro!