Promise me that....

Started by OsCKilO, November 02, 2013, 03:19:47 PM

OsCKilO

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For my Kids....

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Promise me that.... Feat Ed on Bass
Take a look around...
Tell me what you see...
Anger in her face...
Cried with stolen tears...

Careful of her words.
They're not what they seem...
First to cast a stone.
Never without sin.

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(Chorus)
Let Old ghosts be gone
As time marches on.

Living on twice this life can happen oh so fast.
I'm Sorry that you're stuck in the middle little man.
We'll fly that kite in the wind of storms now past...
Promise me that...
Promise me that......

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Believe me when I say...
I hide not a thing....
I tried to keep her safe...
She wanted other things...


I hope she treats you right.
I kinda know she will...
To her you are the light,
In the darkness of her dreams.

(Chorus)

Was it just a dream?
A story never told.
Did we once have love?
I will never know.

We made you with our hearts....
An Angel in the snow...
Hope that fills my eyes...
Life that time will show...



(Chorus)
If ever should she ask...
Yes I loved her so...
And ever should she weep..
There's no grudge to hold.

Listen with your heart
Put away your fears
Fill your life with joy.
With lessons from the year...

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Hook

Powerful song my brother, very moving!
Rock On!

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Because the Hook brings you back
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IanR

#2
This is a really lovely song.  Very emotional.

My only comment (although I was listening through the speakers on my laptop) is that the guitar sounds a little bit bright.  Sounds like you have nice new strings.  Don't get me wrong - the guitar tone is delightful but it cuts through a little too much.  I was thinking as I listened that it might sound good if the chords were played as arpeggios? That would also give you a melody of sorts to follow on with in the break.

Anyway - lovely song and well done.

Thanks,

Ian

EDIT: I'm now listening through my monitors and I take back my comments above.  It sounds great.






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Oldrottenhead

deep and powerful  t. thinking of you big guy.
whit goes oan in ma heid



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Oldrottenhead
"In order to compose, all you need to do is remember a tune that nobody else has thought of."
- Robert Schumann

cuthbert

Very moving - an honest and direct song. The guitar works well with your voice. Wishing you peace, T.
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Gritter

Beautifully expressed Tharek. Your light shines my friend.

Facemask93

I listen to this song & i cry a little inside , cus i know where you are at man, I've been there , your heart is aching , you long to be with your son , you want him to know , you want her to know
Man this is a sad song
im so sorry you are in this pain
I hope things change for you
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 - Roy Harper
      

Redler

So moving, melodic and beautiful... All the best, Tharek!!
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Greeny

A stunning song, T-Man. It conveys so much emotion and feeling, and I know the place it's coming from. Your vocal is incredible. Your songs always have the power to move me, but this one is particuarly special. Oneday everything will untangle. Hold on, brother. Thinking of you.

Geir

Beautiful and so sad. I feel for you T.

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Oh well ........