Mrs. Clementine And Her Red Wine

[Pharoah246]

Using external means to mend internal struggles.

EDIT (11/3/13): Thank you all for the feedback. I've decided to remove the song entirely, as it just didn't come out right, nor do I think it's really a decent song. It was sort of rushed, and so I don't really like it. However, I will be replacing it with a song that'll be much, much better, so stay tuned!

[Hook]

It's a nice tune man but that snare drum got a little distracting to me. It's calling out for a cadence or something a bit more rhythmic but the metronomic snare takes away from your song. Nice picking though!
Rock On!

[Redler]

Yes, nice picking with great voice!! Really melodic stuff! Like it!

[Hilary]

Oh I love the song but I think Hook's right - the snare's a bit overpowering (maybe too prominent in the mix). Have you tried a tambourine with your foot while you're performing? (I'd want to hear it on the off (2nd/4th) beat instead of the on (1st/3rd) beat).

She gets by on faith . . . and red wine - fabulous!

[bruno]

Very nice tune. I agree with Haylie and Hook, the drum all the way through distracts from the song a bit imo. It needs to develop or change (ie more bigger drums), or change/morph somehow. I did think that this tune would sound great with a Bodrum - being deeper and more mellow.
Very nice tune though, I enjoyed this lots.
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