This needs lyrics and vocals....

[Redler]

Hello!

It was rainy day today and I remembered there's several song sketches on the memory card. So, I recorded this on BR-80  via on board mics. I have another indie pop version of this (sketch, tho) with 135 bpm tempo, but I chose this acoustic version (at first?).

The intro lasts until 20 seconds. At 2:10 I added a bit lead guitar, I hope it won't disturb singing...

Cheers,

Kari

[SE]

Hi Kari, really nice acoustic guitar and lead, have downloaded it and will have a go in the next couple of days. I,m sure you might get a few takes, well played!!

[Redler]

Fine!!

[Geir]

Very nice Kari !!

Looking forward to hear what John comes up with !

[maxit]

sweet and deep, a bit melhancolic - it's Nick Drake mood to me. Very classy, I root for you and SE

[SE]

Hi Kari had a wee go at your tune and this is what transpired, hope its ok.
It,s  called Put a Star in Your Heart

[Oldrottenhead]

nice one john, i did a version too https://songcrafters.org/community/index.php?topic=19643.0

[Redler]

I haven been on holidays and didn't see/hear the version by John. Visited here promptly almost daily, but not had a glance to the Collabs...!!

I have listened to John's version several times and I love it, like I love Jim's version, too. It is nice to realize how different lyric and vocal melodies can be work on the same tune!

Cool job, fellas!

Kari

[Hilary]

Oh lovely, I've listened to both versions and like them both.

I love the idea of taking a star from the sky and putting it in someone's heart and the hook is very strong.

Great storytelling from James as always - I'm sure we've all watched those raindrops run down the windows.

Brawtastic guys.

[cuthbert]

Wow, I totally missed John's version...

Really beautiful lyrics and singing, John - I think Kari's tune just conjures up those feelings, as I felt the same about Jim's treatment.

Excellent collab, guys.