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Started by Pharoah246, September 15, 2013, 03:54:15 PM

Pharoah246



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A short little tune about...something  :-*



EDIT: Sadly I have officially decided to throw this song into the failure bin as it didn't really fit with my sound nor with the rest of the tracks on my album. I'll possibly do something later with it and resurrect the tune, but for now it's a no go.
Check out my free online EP "An Inside Sunrise" on SoundCloud here: https://soundcloud.com/luke-williams-83/sets/demos

Hilary

Well firstly I love your tracks and I think you have real talent - but I would agree with you about the sloppy vocals.

Have a listen to it again Luke, as I think there are tuning issues towards the end.

PM me if you want to discuss it.

Haylie




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Pharoah246

Quote from: Hilary on September 15, 2013, 04:55:20 PMWell firstly I love your tracks and I think you have real talent - but I would agree with you about the sloppy vocals.

Have a listen to it again Luke, as I think there are tuning issues towards the end.

PM me if you want to discuss it.

Haylie











Just redid it. Tell me what ya think.
Check out my free online EP "An Inside Sunrise" on SoundCloud here: https://soundcloud.com/luke-williams-83/sets/demos

Hilary

You nailed it - well done  >9|
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Greeny

Really like this. Clean and pure, and there's a great tone and soulfulness to both your vocal and guitar. Reminds of Ryan Adams a bit (a good thing!). Lovely songwriting. Welcome!

Oldrottenhead

you have a fabulous voice. got this on repeat.
whit goes oan in ma heid



Jemima's
Kite

The
Bunkbeds

Honker

Nevermet

Longhair
Tigers

Oldrottenhead
"In order to compose, all you need to do is remember a tune that nobody else has thought of."
- Robert Schumann

Hook

Very beautiful tune! What are you recording on?
Rock On!

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Because the Hook brings you back
I ain't tellin' you no lie
The hook brings you back
On that you can rely

Pharoah246

Quote from: Hook on September 16, 2013, 06:24:51 AMVery beautiful tune! What are you recording on?
Rock On!

Well I was too lazy to record it properly so I just busted out the good ol iPhone and used the voice memo app, threw it in audacity, did some editing and posted it :)
Check out my free online EP "An Inside Sunrise" on SoundCloud here: https://soundcloud.com/luke-williams-83/sets/demos

Jarle

You have a beautiful voice to go with this beautiful song.

JOA
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DeificDave

This is really nice, you definitely have a great sounding voice, sweet guitar picking too, well done!   
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