Instrumental Jam: First proper recording....guitar solo...plz listen

[Trotters]

feedback welcome.

[Mr. Scar]

i can't say much, but i think you're on the right track

[Pedro]

Hello trotters5 and welcome!

Its not bad. I like fast riffs and fast solos and you did a good job on this. Although the solo kind of lacks the sense of melody.

Keep praticing and thanks for sharing.

Also, please, comment on other people's songs as well.

[waynesan76]

Slow down bro! The solo has real potential, is it your own work? It seems as if you're trying to keep up with a tempo that might be a little too quick. I'm also guilty of this in my recording, but I'm learning to drop the tempo a few beats so the solos are more fluid. Also, a few of the notes you hit sounded a little off-key. Have you learned any scales? Again, this peice has potential. Give it another shot and try to stay in time, it would be rockin!

[Ted]

On This Day Bump

This takes off a little like "Search and Destroy" by Iggy and the Stooges. Did David Bowie produce this?