Trapped

[RMO]

here's my fisrt song, please tell me what you think, i know my vocals sucks

i recorded guitar and vocals with the micro br, drums, bass and production were made with fl studio

[Lika]

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii 
Hey, I didn't think your vocals suck eheheheh
You just need a little more practice to get to some higher notes.
Keep the good work!

 

Lika

[Wiley]

You are doing great!!.. I remember the first time I sang.  It wasn't good.  You are wonderful compared to that!!

[Greeny]

I love the sound of the driving punk guitars. Always gets me going, lol. You should be proud of this - for a first effort it's magic.

[tkofaith]

Nice job, keep 'em coming.  One of the great/awful things about recording is that it always gives you a faithful rendering.  You'll look back someday and realize how much working with this little machine has improved your playing/singing/recording skills.

[tafka]

ah punk is alive & well.
vocal suits this perfect.
nice one.

Tony J.

[Flash Harry]

1977 and all that!

Awesome!

[RMO]

thanks a lot guys

[Ferryman_1957]

Don't know how I missed this! Love that punk guitar sound, the instruments come across really well in this. Good drums.

Your vocals are not that bad. As Lika says, a few issues in hitting the notes in places but they actually sound pretty good - well done for having the guts to do it. I would keep practising, my advice in the short term is to not have too much effect on the vocals. It's tempting when you are unsure of the vox, but I think the effect actually makes them stand out a bit more and makes them sound a bit "wobbly". I'd clean them up and pull them back in the mix a bit - let the guitar drive this one.

But keep them coming. As an old punk I love this kind of stuff 

Cheers,

Nigel

[The Reverend 48]

Great Stuff Love the Guitars