what's on your mind by oldrottenhead (now with louder vox mix) and video

[Oldrottenhead]

a wee simple yin.

please excuse the crappy sound from the camera, oh and the crappy singing and playing                                                       
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PSlEByWivA8

Just what you're thinking
I'll never know
Still water runs deep
Both deep and cold
I'll never know
What's on your mind
You drift to sleep
And off you go
To times and places
That i will never know
I'll never see
What's on your mind
What's on your mind
I don't think empathy
Is close enough
I've only guesswork
To be going on
I guess i'll never know
What's on your mind
etc

what's on your mind

w/m
oldrottenhead
electro acoustic and voice

[henwrench]

Great chord changes, love the lo-fi vibe but I'm struggling to hear the words, which is unusual for your stuff. And it would truly shock you if you knew what was on my mind today...

                                                             henwrench

[Oldrottenhead]

a remix needed methinks, the perils of mixing with headphones. heading to work will try a new mix with the vox up a bit later.

[Greeny]

Love the chords. Reminds me of the ones I often slip into for JK! Lovely song, but the vox do need to be brought up at the start.

[Oldrottenhead]

new louder vox mix and lyrics up.

[djbride]

I really like the effect on the guitar.
Vox sound great.
Nice work.

[64Guitars]

Cool. The new mix is much better. Enjoyed the video too.

[bruno]

Haunting chorus - kind of expecting the big drums to come in and the whole song to open out band style!
B

[kenny mac]

If you dont mind Send me a br recording of this jim and ill tinker with it  my spider sense is tingling

[andy casson]

Fantastic Jim, love that chord prog and memorable chorus, while the mix sounds cool to me!

andy