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Started by TomH86, February 18, 2009, 01:00:49 PM

TomH86

Blueonthefloor
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This ones called, Blue On The Floor...

short and simple, as always.


Wiley

Are the cars going by again?  I like it!

Glenn Mitchell

Very nice. I'd like to be able to hear the words clearer.
Altho it seems like a cool part of the arrangement, the vocals sound more like an instrumental effect at these levels.
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Boss BR-800
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Cakewalk Sonar platinum

https://soundcloud.com/you/tracks

knniggits

#3
Is that double tracked vocals,sounds good you have a great voice.
Very catchy tune.
Good work  ;D

The volume seems really high though,unless my computers on the blink  :P
He's not the messiah he's a very naughty boy!

Kody

I really like this man! I like the unique mix you have- where it sounds like cars are going by, etc.!  It's very origianal, I was captivated by it 8)
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Greeny

That's too short! I was just getting into it and it ended. Another LOVELY, quirky, melodic song. I dig your style.

Ferryman_1957

Love it, one of your best. The guitar sounds great on this one, I love the chords in the chorus.

One thing that I find distratcting is the on and off clicks. Altho I can see that might be part of the lo-fi feel, they are so loud compared to the rest of the song, I find them distracting and they spoil the feel of the song for me. Have you thought about editing them out? Wouldn't be hard to do.

Cheers,

Nigel

guitarron

i like the simplicity of it-not too long-good vox


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Boognish

dude that song is really good.  I want to hear more...  can we jam sometime?
Okay to cover.

TomH86

time for a string change I reckon...those bass notes sound a bit iffy.

how many of you are familiar with singer/songwriter M. Ward..? He inspired to me to throw away my pick and start playing with my hand...Id tried and tried and tried..for three years! and got nowhere..I was absolutely hopeless!..But I carried on plugging away..and only recently have I started to develop some sort of a right hand technique...As for song length..I listen to Guided By Voices and a little known singer/songwriter named, A Boy Named Thor..Both artists use song length in a way that interests me...