"Poorly Chosen Words" a Hook original

[Hook]

I've been working on this one for a while now, there are a few spots on the vocal that clipped but I'm gonna stick with this one for a bit. I used the Garage band drums with that roll the dice feature that plays random drum beats and did the drum track first. Then I used the smart strings in garageband and made the progression. After that I did uke and  thumbjam and vocals. Very different tune for me I think.

1 drum track (GB)
1 strings (GB)
1 chorus uke
1 flute(TJ)
1 electric guitar(TJ)
1 lead vocal
1 whisper vocal

Poorly Chosen Words

written & performed by Hook

Simplify Space, remove the middle
Turn the dial, to the left a little

              We speak in what seems like
              Different languages
              We end exactly where we begin

Sanctifying grace, I could use a little
Flip the switch, it's on or off there is no middle

                  Chorus

Expectations, disappointments
Mistaken meanings, misguided emotions
Poorly chosen words

Simplify Space, remove the middle
Turn the dial, to the left a little
Sanctifying grace, I could use a little
Flip the switch, it's on or off there is no middle

[Oldrottenhead]

poorly chosen words the story of my life

hic burp fart braw tell yer maw

[Redler]

Awesome track!! Cool instrumentation and well put them together - sounds orchestral. This works!!

Kari

[DeificDave]

Excellent arrangement, I like the strings and flute, they add a nice texture to this piece, great stuff.   

[The Gobi Desert Canoe Club]

Hi Hook, really enjoyed this cleverly put together piece of work. Ticks all the boxes for me.........Willie

[Rata-tat-tat]

Well this is certainly an open buffet of musical instrumentation... It's like a dog that goes straight for the leg and won't let go no matter how hard you try to kick it off... Your music is humping my mind right now... that's how good this is!!!

[Rata-tat-tat]

Were those poorly chosen words ^^^^

[Hook]

Don't worry about it RTT..have a cigarette!

Thanks for the kind words my friends!
Rock On!

[Gnasty]

That`s what i call super-energy!! Love that intro and the whole thing. You work that TJ like no other.
Fabulastic!!!!!

[Geir]

You are a truly prolific songwriter my friend!!

And you sure know how to use your available instruments to the max.

A great song, excellently performed !

I'm a fan !