I can't move forwards for looking back.

[chunk]

Not quite finished, Probably needs a harp or some sort of fairy dust.

[kenny mac]

I would like to apply some fairy dust chunk but it will not be for a few weeks with one thing and another but I can hear the full thing in my head ,which is always a good thing 

[Oldrottenhead]

fabulous chunk, the mood of it reminds me of something. will stick it on my mbr, but heading off to work right now.

it's a smiths song it reminds me of, cant recall its name

[Hilary]

it's a smiths song it reminds me of, cant recall its name

It reminds me a bit of Lovesong by the Cure - nice one Chunk.

[thetworegs]

Love it....

[Oldrottenhead]

wi wurdz https://songcrafters.org/community/index.php?topic=18216.0 sum durty wans tae.............ye huv been warned.

[thetworegs]

Orh beat me too it but here's a different slant.... a bit dark..but hey i'm trying........

she laid her self open
she laid her self bare
she told me her dreams
show told me her dreams
she told me her dreams how i could for-fill them
she told me her dreams
i wish i'd closed my eyes i didn't want to hear
her screams
now i can't go forward for looking back
no i can't go forwards for looking back
at what i've done

i took away her dreams
i took away her life
i took away her breath
what did i do
what did i do
now i can't go forwards for looking back

i didn't realize the enormity of what i'd done

i can't sleep
i can't sleep
i can't sleep

it's eating me up
it's eating me up

i can't sleep

she laid herself open , she laid herself bare
she told me her dreams
show told me her dreams
she told me her dreams how i could for-fill    her dreams
i wish i'd closed my eyes
i didn't want to hear
her screams
her screams
now i can't go forwards for looking back
for looking back

I can't move forwards for looking back.

Music Chunk Lyrics Reg

[AverGo]

Captivating instrumental, very cleverly put together, love the oriental touch.

[Oldrottenhead]

nice one reg, chunk left us a great palette to work with. funny thing with me is, if i was to approach it now, it would be something different entirely. all depends on the time, yer mood etc etc. but we both went for the dark. thon chunk guys a sorcerer.

[chunk]

No problem Trevor. I love to hear different takes on a tune. I'm exspecting to another version from Kenny Mac in future. The more the merrier. You're right this is dark. Which is good.