Need Lyrics and vocals

Started by djbride, March 06, 2013, 11:03:28 AM

djbride

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A simple Am thing, just 4 tracks, gtr, bass, organ and drums.
Verse, prechorus, chorus with a little organ solo to break things up.
I like the groove of this but I am stuck for lyrics so I am just throwing it out
there to see if anyone wants to try something with it.
Add anything you want to the song.
I can send tracks broken down if you want a different mix.
Thanks,

Dave
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"Rock is dead they say, Long Live Rock, be it dead or alive"    P. Townsend

steelguitar

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Love it.
Great groove, really.
I would like to put french lyrics on it and sing... I am very slow / late / lazy , so it could take some time to finish that project... One month  is it possible for you?
Cheers
Jean-Sébastien



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Farrell Jackson

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Ok here's my lyric/vocal take with Dave's great music. My version is called Game Face.

Farrell

Hi djbride...great song! I'd like to give this a go with lyric and vocals also. I'm sure this will catch many ears and voices before it runs it's course. Give me a few days and I'll have something for you.

Farrell

Game Face

(V1) A sunshine smile, blue eyes and golden locks
Your  body's sculpted from the very finest rock

(Pre Chr) When your head is full of sin
Your world is in a lipstick spin
The golden rules you want to follow
Leave you feeling weak and hollow

(Chr) Put on your game face like the players do,
I'm sure somebody's waiting there for you.

(V2) It's getting hard to hide the lines on your face
What happened to the remnants of your lost faith?

(Pre Chr) You wonder what you're gonna do
If no one buys a drink for you
Hike up that skirt another inch
Inviting eyes to scratch your itch

(Chr) Put on your game face like the players do,
I'm sure somebody's waiting there for you.

(organ solo)

(V3) The tigress needs some brand new clothes
And that is how your whole life goes

(Pre Chr) Your just a cougar on the prowl
Next comes the wink and the growl
A young one's straying from the pack
Ready your claws it's time to attack

(Chr 2xs) Put on your game face like the players do,
I'm sure somebody's waiting there for you.

F. Jackson © 03-06-13

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Farrell Jackson


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Test, test, one, two, three.....is this mic on?

djbride

Yeah  Jean and Farrell have a go at it, whenever you have time, no rush.

Thanks
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thetworegs

Your Love shines with me
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I've got something going on this one...i heard it a little earlier and thought it excellent very uplifting...so for the first time in a longtime i've written some uplifting lyrics ....hope you like it ....i don't mean to pee on anyones fire but what can i say the tune ignited me........a bit like Tom must have felt on Opra.......
Your Love shines with me (Lyrics)
Yours is the Love that shines inside of me
you are the one who excites me
every day i see or feel you near
everything inside my mind becomes so clear
cause i need that love, i need it safe inside me baby

Everything about you just completes me, i love you baby
we need to spend some time  alone,to complete this thing
and my dreams will become true
cause your the only one, who can ignite this love from inside me
you the only, one its true

Love me like you always do and i'll be there just for you
love me everyday and my heart and soul will be so complete
i love you baby, you excite me
Yours is the Love that shines inside of me

i love you baby
i love yes i do

i love you baby yes i do
you know that much it's true
your's is the only love that i've every felt for real
you are the one who excites that makes me want to jump and dance
to say these words to you
i love you baby
i just feel it in my blood, i just can't get enough
your love shines inside me
i love you baby yes i do
your the only one to excite me, yes i love you
Your Love shines within me
Music djbride Lyrics Reg
   
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danieldesete

Great collab, the perfect voice for outstanding music, well done.

Reg that was fast !
hou hou ha ha

steelguitar



WOW, what an inspiration fast as a lightning!!!

Great!

Jean-Sébastien
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djbride

Wow Reg you sure works fast.
I love the lyric and the vocal really has a lot of emotion,
Excellent work my friend,
Thank you,
you made my music come alive.
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Hilary

Oh nice one Reggie and what a fabulous track - I think they'll be a lot of versions of this one and I look forward to hearing them all.
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Speed Demon

Trevor, you've outdone yourself. Excellence personified.

Always a pleasure to listen to your music.


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