The Next Verse

[Everlin]

I wrote this over two years ago, just rediscovered it.  It was actually my first full song. 
Sorry if the recording is a little tinny.

LYRICS:

Empty spaces fill my mind
Paradoxes I have combined
Creative thoughts lost in translation
Destruction is my new creation

I am losing touch
I need higher ground to clutch

Broken bones and tired fingers
A ravaged form of hope still lingers
Dragging feet through snow and sand
Keeping pace, hand in hand

I am losing grip
On flattened ground, I trip

Sore feet and calloused hands
Work hard, meet demands

Take my hand it won't be long
Don't quit now, stay strong

I was losing heart
You pulled me from
The dark

[Farrell Jackson]

Even with a less than desired recording your beautiful voice and talent shine through...bravo! I also like the lyric. I've always said if a person has natural talent it doesn't matter what the recording medium is because you'll hear it regardless of the equipment used. Again....bravo Everlin!

Farrell

[Rata-tat-tat]

Agree with FJ... I think your talent outshines the recording for sure... I'll be looking forward to progress on the recording side of things. You'll definately be a star around here. Great job!!!

Tod

[Gritter]

Sounds very good to me. Beautiful singing and playing. Top notch songwriting and performing. Welcome to the site and thanks for sharing this.

[DeificDave]

This is absolutely great for a first full song, you should be proud, you have a fantastic voice, I'm looking forward to hearing more from you. 

[thetworegs]

Creative thoughts lost in translation.....not at all a wonderful track with a cracking vocal.....a Bravo from me

[Bluesberry]

This is really good.  Lets have some more.  Great guitar and vocals.  Fantastic vocals really.

[Hook]

Excellent performance, I dig your song, welcome!
Rock on!