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Rainy Day

Started by Everlin, March 02, 2013, 09:16:00 PM

Everlin

Rainy Day
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I can't stop
Thinking of clouds
Thinking of rain and storms and you
Can't breathe
Wondering why we fought and why
We never talked
We never honestly spoke of our thoughts

Somebody, Somebody, Somebody stop
Somebody stop the rain
Somebody
I can't complain 'cause I have known love
But I cannot say that I am better off
When I am still sitting here broken and lost

I can't sleep
Under a roof
Under the same roof
As my scars
Can't dream
Haunted by sweaters unraveled at seams
Worried that no one will hear if I scream
It washes us clean

Somebody, Somebody, Somebody stop
Somebody stop the rain
Somebody
I can't complain 'cause I have known love
But I cannot say that I am better off
When I am still sitting here broken and lost

I won't sleep
Waiting for sun
Waiting for when I can finally run
Won't cry
Patiently waiting for puddles to dry
Perched at the edge I believe I can fly

I can't sleep
Can't hide, won't leave

Somebody, Somebody, Somebody stop
Somebody stop the rain
Somebody
I can't complain

I can't stop
Thinking of clouds
Thinking of rain and storms
And you

© Everlin 2013

Geir

Another very good song Everlin. Love that chord progression. Nice guitar work, and excellent vocals!!

Well done!
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Oh well ........

Hilary

A lovely sad song and you perform it so well - I think you've sat down and continuously recorded this until you've got a take you're happy with because you keep starting over. I got to 7.12 at least. You might want to reload it but you should know all the takes are really good (unless you meant to do it of course!)
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Gnasty



Excellent!!! I love the song and your vocals and welcome and more please! :)

Quote from: Hilary on March 03, 2013, 12:34:05 PMyou keep starting over. I got to 7.12 at least. You might want to reload it but you should know all the takes are really good (unless you meant to do it of course!)

Haylie, are you listening to this on an ipad or phone cause the track is only 2:37 min long. I had it starting over and over again on my phone too at the 2;10 min mark again. It`s not the song. It`s the player.
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Hilary

Quote from: Gnasty on March 03, 2013, 12:46:09 PMHaylie, are you listening to this on an ipad or phone cause the track is only 2:37 min long. I had it starting over and over again on my phone too at the 2;10 min mark again. It`s not the song. It`s the player.

ipad yes, but it didn't happen with any other songs - good job I stopped at 7 min something or I'd still be there!
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Jarle

Another lovely song.

JOA
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Redler

Great songwriting and performing! I like your voice - it is excellent!

Kari
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steelguitar

Love it!!
Agree with what said the other comments : great songwriting (beautyfull chord progression, love your dark poetic lyrics), I like your voice!!!
I want to hear more of you, please!!!
Jean-Sébastien
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Another nice song, very introspective sounding lyrics put delightfully to music. I like.............Willie
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