Don't Look

[TomH86]

Yet Another! Seem to be writing a lot lately. I like when that happens.

[Wiley]

Anytime someone wrights something it inspires me. LOL  I'm kind of a sing along kind of person.  sounds Interesting.  I will listen again tomorrow.   Had a few brewskies.  But like the way it started.  At least you can do that. I can't.  I need artifical means (whatever) Catch you all tomorrow.

[TomH86]

i thinm its one of the best songs ive managed to churn out. I tried so hard to write something that make an impact on the listner...And I was pleased with the end result.

[lg]

There is just so much talent here in this forum... I can't believe it!
And you are most certainly one of the talents here.
Another great song Tom!
LG

[Ferryman_1957]

This is really good Tom. Love the eerie start and the breath noises and I love whatever's going on in the background of the chorus (do you have trained ghosts in your house?). My only niggle is that the guitar really sounds thin and trebly. Have you thought about just adding another guitar track to thicken it up a bit?

Cheers,

Nigel

[TomH86]

yeah, Im not happy with the mix after listening to it through headphones..the vocals are panned all wrong and yeah, the guitar sounds a bit weak...as a sidenote, I think there are a few ghouls around these parts, Ive caught some unusual sounds/noises in the past

[TomH86]

bah. Im actually going to keep tht mix.

[Greeny]

I really like your stuff - both the songwriting AND how it's performed. It's fragile, strange and beautiful all at the same time. That's a definite talent you have there. Plough your own furrow and don't give up!!!! 

[The Reverend 48]

Really haunting and Catchy Well Done Its well worth remixing with more bass on the guitar or maybe a dirrerent Patch