Frozen Eyes

Started by Vaisvil, February 10, 2013, 06:36:21 PM

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just in case... http://alonetone.com/vaisvil/tracks/frozen-eyes

Frozen eyes....

and like the wail of a crying child...
she grieves for what is lost to her...
finding solace in a shared moment....
she absently brushes the thought away....

there is no beauty in the sky....
or warmth on her face...
passion is spent...
and loves promise is...
is a lie...

left too long in the sun....
it withers...
it dies...
if not nurtured or cared for...
finding nothing to comfort her frozen heart...

she looks off into the sunset...
far to the west...
to a small land...
with white capped mountains...
frozen eyes look back...

and slowly ...very slowly...
agonizingly slow she turns away....

Kristin Brilliant...........Feb, 1997, music 2013

flyon90

Very bleak, but I enjoyed it alot.  The bass really stands out to me in this piece and drives the song forward.

SwanSong

Wonderful vox. and lyrics. ver soulful sound to the song
very melodic. too..captured my attention all the way ...
wish u the b est NEIL .1

Vaisvil

Thank you Neil and flyon90 for the listen and comments. Yeah, Kristin was going through a patch of disillusionment right there.

Nelson

Uh yeah that's some killer bass and very cool vocals.

Excellent arrangement  and production.

The instrumentation is simply fantastic.
recorder
Reaper
 
recorder
Boss BR-600

Vaisvil

Thank you Nelson!

Its nothing though compared to the War Pigs by Bruno and P777 I'm listening to right now.  ;D

andy casson

I enjoyed this one Chris- though 'bleak' is about right! It's a killer bass and loved the arrangement, very cool listen

Andy

Vaisvil

Thank you Andy

I did start the piece with the bass line and built up from there.