Forever and a day

[Hilary]

Warning to all you rockers out there - this is very girly and twee  

reloaded under the guidance of our leader, many thanks

[AndyR]

Before I press play... this rocker is actually working on twee stuff at the moment... just sayin! 

OK... play...

[AndyR]

... FAB!

I actually think you can "un-twee" it by adding what might seem "more twee" at first. I can "hear" your harmonies on the "won't you be mine, be my valentine" lines (mebbe not the first line). It'll feel really corny while you're doing it, but it'll just stick the icing (and a cherry) on the top

Love it. It's a gorgeous song.

(PS Just been trying to figure out what those harmonies might be - but I can't find them!! So it might be easier said than done )

[Hilary]

yes I can hear them too, but they're quite high - unless I underpin something!

cheers Andy

[DeificDave]

There is always room for twee    ...the guitar sounds sweet on this one, gentle and smooth, nice song, well done.   

[SwanSong]

Wonderful tune and lyricss beside vocals as always
enjoyed so much sweet vocals. happy valentine day
Cheers Neil

[Redler]

Another winner, Haylie!! A bit short, but to me it sounds like a classic!! I admire your skills to write and perform so melodic tunes like this! Brilliant!

Kari