Forever and a day

Started by Hilary, February 05, 2013, 10:46:32 AM

Hilary



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Warning to all you rockers out there - this is very girly and twee  ;D

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AndyR

Before I press play... this rocker is actually working on twee stuff at the moment... just sayin!  ;D

OK... play...
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Is just a piece of paper
To say a few lines
Make up my mind
So she can read it later
When I'm gone

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AndyR

... FAB!

I actually think you can "un-twee" it by adding what might seem "more twee" at first. I can "hear" your harmonies on the "won't you be mine, be my valentine" lines (mebbe not the first line). It'll feel really corny while you're doing it, but it'll just stick the icing (and a cherry) on the top :)

Love it. It's a gorgeous song.

(PS Just been trying to figure out what those harmonies might be - but I can't find them!! So it might be easier said than done ::))
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PreSonus Studio One

(Studio 68c 6x6)
   All that I need
Is just a piece of paper
To say a few lines
Make up my mind
So she can read it later
When I'm gone

- BRM Gibb
     
AndyR is on

   The Shoebox Demos Vol 1
FAWM 2022 Demos
Remasters Vol 1

Hilary

yes I can hear them too, but they're quite high - unless I underpin something!

cheers Andy
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DeificDave

There is always room for twee  ;D  ...the guitar sounds sweet on this one, gentle and smooth, nice song, well done.   
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SwanSong

Wonderful tune and lyricss beside vocals as always
enjoyed so much sweet vocals. happy valentine day
Cheers Neil

Redler

Another winner, Haylie!! A bit short, but to me it sounds like a classic!! I admire your skills to write and perform so melodic tunes like this! Brilliant!

Kari
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