Sparkles Inst. Needs lyric

[galestermusic]

Ok anyone is free to do what they want with this song. I'm not talented enough to write lyrics. I hear melodies all the time for my songs but I can't do lyrics.

This song was for my wife. Basically we have known each other all of our lives and our paths crossed two years ago. We saved each other. Here eyes have always sparkled and I wanted to do a song for her hence Sparkles. I know....hallmark card lol

Please feel free to create what ever you want with it.

Structure:
4 bars intro
8 bars verseI
8 bars Chrs
8 bars verse II
8 bars chrs
8 bars bridge
8 bars verse III
8 bars chrs
outro

Jim you up for it? Have fun all!

[Oldrottenhead]

yup.

[kenny mac]

I might be up for a go on this as well if that's ok,if it gels right away Ill give it a go,would it be alright to add more instruments to the song as well?

[galestermusic]

That's fine kenny mac. See what comes of it. Looking foarward to hearing it!

[Rata-tat-tat]

Had to check out the first cut... This is awesome Greg. I dig your style...Always have!!! This is an excellent track that I'm sure could spawn many more takes!!! Gonna go listen to ORH's version now!!.

[chuckizzet]

Felt inspired to put vocals and lyrics to this beautiful tune.  Recorded on my laptop on magix music maker the mix and vocals leave a lot to be desired but i hope I've captured some of what LESTG was looking for in the lyrics.

Sparkles

So many days, i don't wanna count them out
So many ways, but never in doubt

it doesn't matter how far apart we are, i still see you in the back of my mind
like a ship sees a lighthouse in the dark, i still see the sparkle in your eyes

i was lost on the stormy seas, i lost my direction
into you i crashed like the waves on the rocks, my idea of perfection

although i though it was you saving me, you were looking to the heavenly skies
for a hand to help you from the edge, was the man who sees sparkles in your eyes

though the years pass faster than a dream, we're dreaming together
although worries try to break us down, just like stormy weather

rpt chorus 2

[Farrell Jackson]

Good vocal and lyric addition chuckizzet! Very smooth and good control.

Farrell

[galestermusic]

Wow! You guys with the lyrical talent amaze me! The courses capture it!

I can hear melodies when I do the songs. I can play instrumentally but I just can't write words.

Great stuff Chuckizzet! Thanks.

[SharksDontSleep]

Be happy with this one chaps, it's a job well done.

Calming