Black Sabbathish song

[godinqc]

Here's a Black Sabbath style song, I took the backtrack and the idea from a Jamie Humpries' book. I was practicing with drop D stuff and decided to record it.
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I'm still struggling a bit with the Balance.. I recorded this song one night and decided to redo parts of it using the Punch in and out feature (what a great feature for beginners like me ) another night, but I had played with my guitar volume knob for other songs. I found that the punch in/out parts where not at the same volume level..
Also does it make a big difference what effect is used when Mastering ? If so which one would be recommended ?
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Anyways this track can use some redoing in a couple/lots of places but any feedback is welcome
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Thanks

[tafka]

sounds to me like a compolation of some their early sruff (ish)
great !!!

[Guitar-Maniac]

great stuff man
lol, the solo part.... reminds me of 'paranoid'

[The Reverend 48]

That is one tight sound...Proper Rock
WELL DONE....
Regarding mastering..I guess people just use the one that sounds right
I tend to use Live mix as it seems to add depth but more experienced BRer's probably can add more.....

[Ferryman_1957]

Indeed, very Sabbath. Hope you haven't sliced the tops off your fingers yet.... Good playing, I didn't notice the punch ins that much (but I wasn't listening thru headphones). Great job.

Cheers,

Nigel

[Bluesberry]

Regarding mastering..I guess people just use the one that sounds right
I tend to use Live mix as it seems to add depth but more experienced BRer's probably can add more.....

Yea, I usually end up using Live Mix as well.  I try the others but keep going back to live mix.  Great guitar playing, it sounds perfect for this style of song.  What kind of guitar is that (is it a Les Paul?)

[guitarron]

nice-what drums did you use/

[lg]

Sounds to me like it would have fit in nicely on the Masters Of Reality album....
Very nicely done!
LG

[godinqc]

Thanks for the feeback .. As for the drums it was a backtrack that I imported. As for the guitar used it's a Godin LG guitar with the MS Drive effect. I really like this guitar the only thing I would change would be to get the Humbucker version vs single coils.
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Just wanted to say how great this forum is .. Keep up the good work
Thanks again

[knniggits]

Nice work,you got that early sabbath tone spot on