The Ghost Killer - Working progress Demo

[Daniel Storey]

I have had a few days spare recently due to a cold... Decided to demo one of my tracks with a bit more instrumentation... Like how I want it to feel when I record it on an EP I will be making... I only have HEAD PHONES to mix on, so I advise you use them to listen

The vocals are a live take. I intend to re-do them once im feeling fully better. The bass is my acoustic, and lots of EQ! I got the drums from 'monkey machine' online. Oh, and sorry about the click at the start

Let me know what you think please...

Here are the LYRICS:

Welcome to the ghost parade
come on, roll up!
All your dreams are made
Paper moulded killers have broken all the mirrors
Banished you into the grave

Make youself at home and come right in
Please, Take a seat!
Let's begin
Hang your coat by the fire
The flames burn so much brighter when fuelled by the light within

Taken to the monsters lair
Broken and beyond repair
You have got to pay the ghost killer
Break into a shiver
There's nothing you can do!
There's no escape

Create your own scene
A silver crystalline electromagnetic dream
There's nothing we can do
Judgement is overdue
The jury's out for each and all of you
You've got to pay the ghost killer
Break into a shiver
There's nothing you can do
There's no escape

Copyright owned by Daniel Storey (c) 2012

[henwrench]

GREAT song. All the elements are already present here, watch you don't lose any of them when you re-record this!!

                                                             henwrench

[Tangled Wires]

Yet another killer Daniel Storey song, loved everything about this.

Acoustic bass sounds wicked when it kicks and its great to hear one of your songs with added intrumentation. The vocal sounds good to my ears, cold or no cold.

Just hope you know how good this is!

[launched]

Wow, you made excellent use of your free time, sounds awesome!

Love it, I agree with Mr. Wrench, sounds great as it is - Try not to let the vibe go on a subsequent recording.


Mark

[Redler]

Fantastic singer songwriter music, Daniel!! The whistle part gives a nice flavor on this... Well done!!!

Kari

[Rata-tat-tat]

Daniel... your a real talented dude... I agree with Henny... Try not to lose any of this magic when you record. If you build off of what you already have... this will be a smasher! Love it buddy.

[Bluesberry]

First off, what a great acoustic part here.  Well played, well recorded.  Then the vocals stand out for the excellence that they are. Wild spooky whistles. That is a bass line.  Its all good.

[SE]

Great listen,top vox too, love hear the final take.

[Nelson]

You have got to pay the ghost killer
Break into a shiver
There's nothing you can do!
There's no escape.

Briliantly, Daniel.
You are indeed, a very talented chap.
Love the full sound scape and the infectious groove.

Well Done

[Daniel Storey]

Thanks for your kind words all... Gonna buy a bass guitar this week Still have that cold though, grrrrr. Been working ona  couple of other tracks, really taking shape, once i have them demo, i will upload them... Keep an ear out