"Searching" - I'd love to hear your feedback :)

[olafgoesraawr]

Hello there,

Here's yet another of my originals - called "Searching".

http://www.ebutuoy.com/watch?v=wSq_Tsqktdk&feature=ebutuoy_gdata_player

The lyrics are in the video description on ebutuoy, and if you want the chords (which should be simple enough to work out anyway), just ask

Again, I haven't spent much time on it at all, it's still pretty rough, but I'd like to hear your feedback. I appreciate every single comment.

Thanks, and may the force be with you (Y)

[Redler]

Nice acoustic tune! Liked the tempo changes! You've fantastic voice!! Welcome to the site, Olaf!

Kari

[Oldrottenhead]

here is me been trying to master the guitar longer than you have been on the planet. wonderful. braw tell yer maw.

[olafgoesraawr]

Thanks so much guys, it isn't as good as it could be, I have a lot to work on, but your comments sound encouraging.

Peace out.

[steelguitar]

Nice tune!

Interesting use of changes in tempo.
Your voice is cool!  Like your strumming on guitar, giving rythm and great turnarounds

If I was you, I would include more arpeggios between low and rapid tempo
Very nice original!

Jean-Sébastien

[Hook]

 Nice tune, full of emotion!
Rock On!

[The Gobi Desert Canoe Club]

Hi Olaf and welcome aboard, good playing and vocal. What are you using to record on?............Willie

[olafgoesraawr]

I don't have any recording equipment, so all I'm using is an iPad2 and its mediocre camera with voice recording. So excuse the poor quality.

Do you recommend any good, but fairly cheap microphones/voice recorders I could use?

[thetworegs]

Your voice is great and your guitar playing is too ......you don't need to record professionally put a Micro br on your Christmas list and you'll be away a second hand one im sure you could pick up for as little as £60 on eBay and it will fit in our pocket so it will always be with you check it out

[AndyR]

Yep, another nice one.

And yeah, look at a Micro BR and you'll be away