wedding ring - max&franco

[maxit]

here's my yet not complete song, but I'm too curious to know from you about it. Kinda nick drake song, or old dark english ballad, if not that they didnt use to talk about this subjects LOL
me on the guitar and my friend franco singing, just a guitar and voice

WEDDING RING

I see her by the riverside   
See her from my door
I see her at the marketplace
Till I can see no more

I follow her in the crowded streets
Know where she's going to
To meet her new young lover
The way that lovers do
B
If I could ever buy her
I'd bring the world if she please
If I could ever beg her
She'd have me on my knees
She'd have me on my knees
A
Come on the boat is leaving
Come on with your ticket man
You're master of your time and will
Be any good or bad
A
But I can't ever leave this town
Cause I don't feel a thing
Except when she's around me
Her body sweet and slim
B
SOLO SU:  If I could ever buy her
I'd bring the word if she please
If I could ever beg her
She'd have me on my knees
She'd have me on my knees
A
I kissed her one summer night
Her mouth was warm and sweet
Can make love if you need, she said
But you know it just can't be
A
Cause if you'd ever win me
It wouldn't mean a thing
Joanna is my lover's name
We don't need wedding ring
B
If you could ever win me, she said
It wouldn't mean a thing
Joanna is my lover's name
We don't need wedding ring
We don't need wedding ring
A
Come on the boat is leaving
Come on with your ticket man
You're master of your time and will
Be any good or bad
A
But I can't ever leave this town
Cause I don't feel a thing
Except when breathe her skin so fine
Or hear her sweet voice
Sing

[Geir]

oh .... this is stunning !!

a beaut of a song.

wouldn't change a thing ! works very well stripped down like this

[Redler]

This is just fantastic Max and Franco!! Great playing and singing! Loved the ethereal feel on this! Love it!!

Kari

[SE]

Top acoustic tune, excellent vox and guitar enjoyed it very much!

[cuthbert]

Beauty of a song, fellas.

Love the clean sound of guitar and voice...brings vintage Nick Drake to mind in parts, but that's not a bad thing at all! Love the dynamics on the guitar...stunning!

[Hilary]

Oh this is just lovely, beautiful story telling and glorious acoustic and vocals. Mighty fine boys.

[Oldrottenhead]

this calls for a FMGWABP!

[boneonbone]

Nice folk ballad and story telling.  Love the sound of the picked acoustic and the way it rings out. 

[Tangled Wires]

As guitar and voice songs go this is stunning, and the stripped down nature just adds to the beauty of it all.

Wonderful finger picked guitar playing, love the way you combine the bass notes with the higher note melody. The vocal is sublime and it sounds so warm and intimate.

Fabulous song!

[SwanSong]

Wonderful collab. great vox nice and melodius. song
great lyrics. and superb vox. very relaxing song
cheer s NEIL.