Rainbow V 1&2 - steelguitar Original - Work In Progress...

[steelguitar]

Hi everybody!   Here a song I made. A work in progress song.
Just an instrumental guitar for the moment.
It's quite funny how like just a minor chord progression (in a major mode?) can have a happy sounding...  
A "bow", a link  between minor and major sounds, just like a rainbow is a step between rain and sun... between sadness and happyness... an other word for a transition?

http://soundcloud.com/steelguitar/rainbow-original-demo-work-in
http://snd.sc/W3zaEl
Hope you will like it!
Jean-Sébastien

PS : Version 2 added 05/11/2012
Here a more complete version, with some chords for the stanza ...
http://soundcloud.com/steelguitar/rainbow-v2-original-demo-work

[Oldrottenhead]

sounding good jean-sebastien, lots of potential reminds me of the beatles and bowie all at the same time. and a step between rain and the sun i like, conjures up so many images.

[Hilary]

Oh this is lovely Jean-Sébastien, I think there's a kind of serenity to it . . .

On my 2nd listen

[SwanSong]

Wonderful guitar playing and  smooth sound
surely can b developed more and u have a
great start to a great song cheers NEIL ...!

[Geir]

lovely "

looking forward to hear the finished product !

[steelguitar]

Thank you all !!! It's good to hear kind comments!

Here a more complete version, with some chords for the stanza ...
http://soundcloud.com/steelguitar/rainbow-v2-original-demo-work

Hope some constructive critics!

Jean-Sébastien

[The Gobi Desert Canoe Club]

Hi Jean-Sebastien, I listened to both versions and you've made great progress. I have no criticism but in my head I can hear it with a simple bass track and possibly a secondry lead track put a long way back in the mix but this is only as I hear it, I'm sure you know what you have in your mind. Good work...............Willie

[olafgoesraawr]

You know what Jean-Sebastian, if I was you, I'd keep it an instrumental, because it's brilliant.

Even the unfinished version sounds pretty damn good - really smooth and flowing; a true pleasure to listen to.

Keep up the good work man!

Olaf

[Hilary]

Oooh lovely - I'd keep it as an instrumental too (as much as I like to hear your beautiful lyrics).

[steelguitar]

Thank you!

To Willie Wendon, I will record an other version (more accurate), and if someone want to add a bass line to it, I will be allright! ;-)

To Haylie and Olaf, I don't know really what I want to do now. I will try to write lyrics, even if it is not bad without vocals. If it is not satisficing with lyrics, I will keep it without lyrics!

Jean-Sébastien