I'm falling for you by DeificDave and Hilary

[Hilary]

We this is it, my attempt at singing to Dave's track - err it's not my personal experience! Done on internal mics. I've mixed it  

link to the original backer

https://songcrafters.org/community/index.php?topic=16394.new;topicseen#new

Thanks Dave - sorry it's girly and not about space but I did work dark matter in there somewhere, it's the thought that counts . . .

I'm falling for you – Hilary Fox 20.9.12

I can't stop listening to all of your songs
How could something so right, be so wrong
You got me up dancing to your beat
Someone should have warned me, coz I'm in too deep

It's on my mind, I need some therapy
Look what your rocking has done to me
I'm up all night dancing to your beat
Someone should have warned me, coz I'm in too deep

You've got me, you've hooked me
Good and true
You've got me, where you want me
I'm falling for you

Your music brings colour to my life
Your dark works hurt me, cut me like a knife
How could something beautiful be so wrong
How can you touch my heart with your songs

I'll be your puppet, I'll be your muse
I'll be the joker, just here to amuse
I'll fight to be good each and every day
Do what's right, I'll play it your way

****

I'm drifting to the dark, the dark, dark matter
My heart's gonna to break I can feel it shatter
The colours fading now, shifting to gray
Why didn't up warn me, why didn't you say

I'm in too deep, I can't get out now
I bet you're pleased, you should take a bow
You got me up dancing to your beat
Someone should have warned me, coz I'm in too deep

[Hilary]

The song's loaded now, hopefully.

[Redler]

Nice and melodic, Haylie!! I like this version, too (beside Hook's take). Yes, Dave's original backer works well both on vocals and instrumental!

Kari

[Hilary]

Oh thanks Kari

[SwanSong]

HI Haylie and Dave. surely one of your best in myopinion
to date love this . great peice great bump cheers NEIL.!

[Hilary]

Thanks Neil - it's my first proper go at writing lyrics to someone else's music - although I did cheat a bit, I already had the first 2 verses written (abandoned like 90% of my stuff!).

[djbride]

This sounds very good, I know it is hard to write to someone else's music
but this flows very nicely, great melodic vocal lines, strong lyrics.

Nice work.

[phantasm777]

nice haylie! try some reverb on some songs!

[Hilary]

Thanks guys

[cuthbert]

Beautiful vocal & harmonies, Haylie, and what a backer, DeificDave! I need to check out the other posts.