Eleanor Rigby (song deleted 14.10.12)

[Hilary]

That's very creative. I like the constant root note being held out. The voice is fantastic.
I like it alot.

Ooooh thanks very much, you've just made my day and a warm welcome to Songcrafters to you 

[Glenn Mitchell]

One of my fav's of the era. What a great voice! So sweet tone.

[Hilary]

One of my fav's of the era. What a great voice! So sweet tone.

Thanks Glenn, that's such a compliment coming from Mr Smooth

[SharksDontSleep]

Quite like this, but would love to hear it with the improved harmony line.
For me (and it's only my opinion), the harmony line stays on the same note for far too long ... Or maybe it's too high in the mix.

However none the more for that, it's a great rendition, which hopefully (and as I say, it's only my opinion) could get even greater.

Lovely vocals & subtle guitar playing.
Wish I had a gentle edge ... One day 

[Hilary]

Quite like this, but would love to hear it with the improved harmony line.
For me (and it's only my opinion), the harmony line stays on the same note for far too long ... Or maybe it's too high in the mix.

However none the more for that, it's a great rendition, which hopefully (and as I say, it's only my opinion) could get even greater.

Lovely vocals & subtle guitar playing.
Wish I had a gentle edge ... One day  

I quite agree - it's not even consistent throughout - wasn't going to post it as didn't think it was good enough but accidentally overwrote the beginning of the track so would have to start the whole thing over. Maybe I'll give it another go, it'd be nice to have something in Beatlesfest 2 - thanks for the comments.

[Hilary]

I've redone it - just got to wait for everyone to go to bed so I can mix it! - thanks for all your feedback and for Sharks for the kick up the backside  . I'll get 64 to delete this thread so I don't have 2 versions of the same song on the board.

[SharksDontSleep]

You mean I've actually been helpful 
Well there had to be a 1st time