" Tossin' & Turnin' " a Hook original

Started by Hook, August 24, 2012, 06:14:46 AM

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Tossin' & Turnin'
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I've been working on this one most of this week, I think I started on Monday. The tune itself has been over 10 years in the making. I wrote the verse riff and a similar chorus a long time ago. I aslo had the lyric up to the line "Trade My briefcase for a paper bag" but could never get any further. I decided to record it and finish it over last weekend. I recorded the guitar and rewrote the music for the chorus, did the percussion and bass. managed to tackle the lyric, but took me a few sittings. I added the thumbjam and mixed and mastered this morning. All done on the MBR.
1- guitar
1-bass
1- tri-bongo
1-shaker egg
3- vocal tracks
1- muted trumpet (TJ)
Tossin' & Turnin'
written & performed by Hook
Tossin' & turnin" another sleepless night
I'm lost in thought nothing goes right
Reality a quick blow to the head
There's and angle above me saying you're better off dead

     Trade my briefcase for a paper bag
     It's a choice that was made but one I never had
     The simple life I thought I'd love
     This isn't the simple life I thought of

Tossin' & turnin' Restless Leg Syndrome
I get no rest & every day I grow a bit more numb

       Trade my guitar for a salary
        It's a choice that was made but not by me
       The simple life that I thought I might love
       This simple life no it's not  simple enough

Reality has not be friended me
Always an angle to remind me
No one said this would be easy

           Verse 1
        
           Chorus 1


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I like the mix of a modern sound with a Latin feel.
You have put a lot into this and it really works !
Nice one
Roy

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Oldrottenhead

magic but i have a complaint. i get gas listening to your songs lately. i now need a tri-bongo as well as the other things listed on your earlier songs ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D.

braw tell yer maw.
whit goes oan in ma heid



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Very cool. I love that thumbjam trumpet. Very realistic!

Love the bongos too. Rock on Maynard!  8)



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Great song Bro, one full of meaning. The music industry in a tough one - and 'living the dream' is a tough road. I think I swapped my guitar for a briefcase many, many years ago - a now play just for the love of it. Despite that, there has been long periods where I simply haven't played - this site is a great outlet, and re-kindles that desire to produce music

Though provoking.

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