jemima's kite dark star (work in progress)

[Oldrottenhead]

when i went to work yesterday, i thought that's another one done, tim did music with bridge and chorus vox, i added 2 verses and sang over tims words as lead vocal and mike added bass. however, my lyrics and tims didnt merge together (not my opinion i thought it was fandabbydozy) so i was asked to rewrite the bridge and chorus, so mikes bass is missing and no backing vox from tim, but once they return from respite, finished song will hopefully blow yer socks aff, so heres a taster for now, minus aforementioned bits, tim thinks it makes more sense now lyrically, i wrote it and dont have scooby wot its about lol.

[Oldrottenhead]

wasn't happy with my vox on 1st post. i was sober, so a few stellas later heres a more relaxed version with baking vox.

[lg]

Sounds good, the wah guitar kinda grabs your attention,
then the lyrics and vox suck you in....LOL
I love it.
Straight to the mp3 player.

LG
 

[launched]

This is great - I anxiously await the finished product!!

Peace,

Mark

[Oldrottenhead]

we never finished it

[Greeny]

This one got canned pretty early on

[Oldrottenhead]

a lost gem needing hicced bumped i mean

[Ted]

I especially love the "wah-wah-wahwakkawah wah" in the right channel.

Good masterbumping, ORH!

[T.C. Elliott]

I really enjoyed this track. See if you can get the track mixed sans vox and then do another version with the original vox just for comparitive purposes. I'd like to hear the differences actually.

But I enjoyed the track both musically and melodically.

[Oldrottenhead]

otdb for an an unfinished jk song.