Rockatron--- "You Wanna Jump"

[Rockatron]

Obviously, I had a few tunes done over the past months which I didn't post here. 
So here's a tune I did with my girlfriend who does the back vocals on occasion.  Hope you like it and comment if you wish.
Lyrics are:
YOU WANNA JUMP!


You wanna jump (jump!) to save your life

You don't care if you're flying high

You wanna feel (feel!) alive and wild

Do it for the trill, you're IN FOR THE Chill!!!


From a land of Junk to nice shiny bunks

He rose from the shadows to impose his rules

Dreaded from all but his mother-in-law

No remorse he was the sheriff of his home town Loblaws


Immersed in chaos and flowers, 

The choice was his to make his own bread and butter

His health took a tumble as he packed on the pounds

He managed to survive, he was no large hound

[Rata-tat-tat]

Love that solo bridge .. and guitar is sublime. Vox kick ass...whats not to like about this one.  Great job

[Rockatron]

Thanks dude, glad you enjoyed it!  I had a blast doing this with my gf.  She gets a kick as much as I do in doing so!

[Hook]

Totally rocks! I'd say she's a keeper!
Super cool, fun tune.
Rock on!

[Redler]

Cool guitar work, Rockatron! Your girlfriend's voice sounds very fine on the backing vocals! Fine job!

Kari

[Glenn Mitchell]

This sounds like great fun. Nice tones.
I'd bring up the vox.
good solo

[SwanSong]

HI . good stuff smooth and produced well
i agree very nice tones good vox. Cheers Neil.!