star crisis incomplete

[beleg]

Here is a song fragment I have been working on for a number of days. I am stuck and do not know where to go next with it. I am hoping that one of you will have a good suggestion. Feal free to do whatever you want to it. And a new section, layer it, slice it, dice it... whatever. Hopefully I will be inspired by whatever element you add to finish the damn thing.        

[beleg]

Here are a few of the music elements broken out.     This was all done on my iphone btw.

[Oldrottenhead]

hypnotic! love it! when i am sober i'll see if i can come up with a lyric for this. what software did you use thumbjam?
braw tell yer maw!

[Speed Demon]

I like this. Tinkering time.

[Greeny]

Hey Beleg! Welcome back! This is lovely. Very inspiring...

[beleg]

oldrottenhead,   I am using Garage band for the iphone. I am thinking about picking up an external mic so I can start adding some uke to these thumbjams.

Greeny,
          Thank you.

[Oldrottenhead]

added some vox https://songcrafters.org/community/index.php?topic=14814.0