Todo a cien - Fito & Fitipaldis

baterpruf · March 21, 2012, 03:45:05 AM

I recorded this song some time ago using a microBR (now I don't have it, I got the BR80). Some editing was made in Audacity.
The drums are arranged with the microBR presets. All instruments (except guitars) come from a cheap Casio Keyboard and don't sound very well. Using LMMS or similar would have been better?
I didn't record the voice, I'm not a very good singer but the real problem is the notes are out of my limited range. It would be nice if anyone wants to sing over it. Here's the original...

And my video:

https://www.ebutuoy.com/watch?v=AYByBBamTOA

I'm willing to hear some feedback, no matter how pitiless or cruel it is. Just Throw it! I want to improve for my next one.

Note: if you wonder what I wrote in the video (spanish) is more or less a comentary of the making.

Oldrottenhead · March 21, 2012, 04:25:21 AM

wow great first post baterpruf

64Guitars · March 21, 2012, 01:31:35 PM

Excellent!

Speed Demon · March 21, 2012, 07:59:20 PM

Excellent guitar work.

Do you have any plans for adding vocals to this song?

baterpruf · March 22, 2012, 03:00:47 PM

Hi Speed Demon (wow what a picture!) Thanks for commenting.
I would like to add the voice but it's too high for me. It would be nice if someone wants to make a collaboration. I was going to post it in COLLABORATIONS but it's only for original work.

Speed Demon · March 22, 2012, 03:32:53 PM

Sing in your natural voice. The track can always be enhanced and fine-tuned during the editing/mixdown stage.

Trying to sing and sound like anyone else is frequently an exercise in frustration.

Hook · March 23, 2012, 05:05:07 PM

Man this sounds great! Such clean playing, cool riffs, killer solo. The production sounds great; I say figure out how to sing in your range, change somethings, make the vocal your own. Stay true to the text and change the melody a little, through it all out the window and right your own version, who cares! Truth of the matter is it's pretty damn fine the way it is!
Rock on!