Here I Stand

Started by dstuart, February 13, 2012, 10:44:33 AM

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Recorded this last summer. Quite liked the idea of writing a song which swelled into something at the end (probably inspired a bit by John Mayer's "In repair") and possibly this may get taken to an electric versian with a full band, Hammond style organ. I don't know, but if you tell me what you think and any improvements it'll be much appreciated, Dan :)

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Great Song Dan!


Love the sound of that acoustic!
Got some real old-school flair there!

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Hook

Nice tune, I'd like to hear it produced, great guitar work!
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Rata-tat-tat

Hey Dan this is a realy creative tune with lotsa nice turns. The only minor change I would suggest.... and I do mean minor... I thought lead guitar track was a little too hot in the beginning maybe blend that in with the rhythm as you do your fade in. Way to go.... I would like to hear lots more from you for sure.
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Got a real nice vibe going there!  I hear what you're saying with going full electric band.  Would be killer but you'd need to build into it as the accoustic feel needs to stay for much of it I think.  Great of work!  Love it!
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Wonderful guitar ...liking your vocal too....the tracks got a great vibe.......
   
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Ferryman_1957

Lovely song, great playing and a lot to like here. I think it works well as it you have done it!

Cheers,

Nigel

dstuart

thanks for the feedback and nice comments... appreciate it