New song: KrazYK

[RevHeadRaZ]

This is just SICK!!!

Awesome work. awesome playing.

Thanks dood!! it's good to hear people enjoy a bit of metal. 
MORE METAL!! I'd love to colab with some metal heads!! Any1?

[dragonshade]

Would love to. Child of the 80's metalhead here.... however you are so W-A-Y beyond me technically, don't know what I could offer. I got my MBR a few weeks back, and am still going nuts working on Metallica covers lol.

[holdempok]

I wrote some lyrics to this I have been thinking about this all week.

I was so close
but i let it slip away

All you needed was
The love I did not have
For you, for myself, For no one...
But now I do, and it's too late or
Is it not? One more shot!

I'm afraid of the rejection I could receive.
Those Times that I did not Beleive.

I see the light now
I can fight stronger
than anyone Please tell me.....

Your Heart is not broken
From how I acted
my behavior
The words I spoken
repeat

Does your Promise
Still remain from
The first time I read it
And I shamed your name

Was it my fault
I was abused
livin with those
who only confuse

Beat till I fought back
Left Never
Looking at those days again
Please tell me.....


Your Heart is not broken
From how I acted
my behavior
The words I spoken
repeat

[holdempok]

 

the whole thing is too fast for these lyrics...unlees you helicopter pilot the whole song. or scream your ass off. How do you see it Rev?

[topsail]

Very interesting, I like!

You should make a video with a animated giant demon possum chewing through your wall and destroying the band as they thrash away?

Perhaps being riden by Ozzy?

[RevHeadRaZ]

the whole thing is too fast for these lyrics...unlees you helicopter pilot the whole song. or scream your ass off. How do you see it Rev?

Great lyrics man!!! I would like to write another song for them!
Something more layback, chucky groove...

I write most of my songs based on themes and at the time i wrote this..
I work night shift, get home at 8:00AM and this possum was getting in through a hole in the my roof (at the end of the night, before i get home). So when i get home, make noise, and wake it up, it would crack the shits, growling and hissing..
So it's scratching and biting at my wall from the inside, while im on the other side banging at the wall, yelling abuse...
u should have heard the noises this little sucker made!!!! STRAIGHT FROM HELL!!
So before leaving for work(11:00) each night, i would setup my marshall facing the wall inside my house, while playing from outside, waiting at this little hole for the bastard to run out, so I could plug the hole........This went on for a week! It was a duel between 2 angry creatures of the night. 
I wrote this song in 1 day at mates house on the weekend.. Song is in C# harmonic Minor, The frantic "trilled" sections (pre-chor, and chor) are the battles between the possum and I. The "slid octave chords" sections (Verses) is the plotting of the battles. The "off time riff" and solo sections (Bridge) is the final duel.
I can hear heavy rap like vocal during verses, screamed pre-chor's, sung chorus (I-VI-V progression), and a built up bridge (maybe whispered to heavy, then back to whispered on the halftime change.
What u think?

[Bluesberry]

I agree, Holdem, these are really great lyrics.  This would make a killer song in the right setting.

[holdempok]

dude do another. with some breaks. more metallica style / Creed. oops sorry/ but a good blend.

we'll fucking hit this!

[RevHeadRaZ]

dude do another. with some breaks. more metallica style / Creed. oops sorry/ but a good blend.

we'll fucking hit this!

Hey dood im in the making.. I Have few ideas... Keep ur eye out for a post

[RevHeadRaZ]

this song is awesome. even better with the imense solo. if you ask me, and even if you don't... i think you should write some lyrics about your frequent encounter with this mischievous possum. obvioulsy then, they will tie in nicely with the song. it's a tune that definately deserves to be finished off. i would also like to have a go at putting some vocals to it, but i think it would be best with your own lyrics and as much input as you could give really. of course, i wouldn't be offended if you didn't want me to be involved at all. you know... whatever. 

Hey dude, thanks for comment...
I would write lyrics to it, but i have real trouble with writing lyrics...
I'd love to hear what u could do with it (Ur song "Mottephobia" kicks ass!), Do ya wanna givus a hand writing the lyrics? Just PM or email me