"Shouldn't Be" hardlock original

Started by hardlock, January 27, 2012, 10:28:49 PM

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Hi all!  Sorry to be away so long but here's my latest effort.  I'm fairly happy with it for a change but you be the judge!  :D  Lots of guitar leads (heavy one at end) with some "rap" lyrics.  :P

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"Shouldn't Be" - 1-1-2012 (c) Ken J Hill
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Here we go - look out below - long time ago - don't you know

That's the way - time to play - can't you say - a better day

Not that far - who we are - raise the bar - now find that star
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Over there - need to care - getting rare - can not compare

Back to school - find the rule - not a fool - just a tool

Time to go - now you know - how to grow - the seeds you sow
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Can you find - that certain kind - to define - your state of mind

All we see - shouldn't be - can't be free - don't look at me

Now we're here - shouldn't fear - shed a tear - for those dear
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Those things we take for granted - when we're young and immature - will surely return to haunt us when we're old and insecure

henwrench

Fantastic in all areas...playing, sound, song.... great!!

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The job of the artist is to deepen the mystery - Francis Bacon

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Oldrottenhead

loving the tones on the lead guitar, cool n jazzy song magic.
whit goes oan in ma heid



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hardlock

Opps, thanks much guys!  Once again I forgot to set notify....

Off to hear everyones posts - been away too long!
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thetworegs

Quote from: henwrench on January 28, 2012, 05:26:48 AMFantastic in all areas...playing, sound, song.... great!!

                                                             henwrench
got to agree with Hen.....wonderful...nice and jazzy
   
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Geir

g ot to agree with 2Regs

fab tune ! I'm a fan !
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