Beat the boss, get the girl

[Greeny]

freakin' hell what have you done to that song? that's terrible!  

I went for David Bowie...

It came out David Brent 

[possibly]

Well, that's interesting.

I have to say I don't think the song was particularly structured towards a vocal. Fun listening though.

I have a more vocal friendly thing I will try and put up on the weekend, be interested to hear your take on it.

[Flash Harry]

freakin' hell what have you done to that song? that's terrible!  

I went for David Bowie...

It came out David Brent 

Just think of him as a chilled out entertainer!   

[Greeny]

The sad thing is that can play 'Freelove Freeway' on the guitar, but haven't done it in a corporate training session. Yet 

[wrland2]

good effort. A very active song. great intro. very active bass. I like Greeny's efforts at vocal too for sure (I always feel more vulnerable with lyrics,singing, etc.. than with other instruments - so good work). It is a different type of strong structure for sure. I love active bass lines and I love vocals - a lot of times they compete. There's enough pause in the song to warrant some vocals or something, and there's enough instrumental to try and keep it that way. nice work. who did the bass (I like your creative work!)?

[lg]

Well after listening to this with Greeny's  added lyrics, I have to admitI like it.
Good job Greeny.
And as for the bass... WOW! Awesome!
Possibly, was that you playing the bass?
I liked it.
I think this is going to become a favorite of mine...
LG
 

[possibly]

Yuss, that was me playing - thanks for your kind words.

I've been meaning to post more here, but life and work is intruding atm

[wrland2]

I need more cowbell ;-)