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Started by maxit, December 05, 2011, 01:31:56 AM

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Lot of sad songs, but not today! This one I wrote for childs, childs expecting to be big man nd big man expecting to be child.... I tried a rhymed translation, but I gave up, you'll understand. ciao!

Quando grande, io sarò
Una terra, troverò
Dove andare, si potrà
A giocare in libertà

Una spada, mi servirà
Quella scopa, bene andrà
Il destriero, ce l'ho già
Una pedalata e va

In qella terra, di libertà
Orologi, non ce ne sta
Sempre pronto, un mago c'è
Fà magie solo per me

Oggi è solo martedì
Aspettiamo venerdì
Compiti oggi non ce n'ho
Mi sa che parto, andrò

Quando grande, io sarò
Questa terra, io vedrò
Quando grande, io sarò
Questo io lo so

Fiabe a sera e mezzogiorno
Gnomi e fate, sempre intorno
Principesse e principi
Sempre misteri, da scoprir

Oggi è solo martedì
Aspettiamo venerdì
Compiti oggi non ce n'ho
Mi sa che parto, andrò
(Andrò...)

Se quella terra, poi non troverò
Con la mia testa, la inventerò
Vederla intorno, tu potrai
Se i miei occhiali, indosserai

Sarò grande, ma però
Un po' bambino, io resterò
E se vorrai giocar con me
Saremo in due io e te
Io e te....
When a big man, I will be
 A land, I will find, and you will see
 Where to go, you'll ever can
 To play freely, when you want

 A fine sword, I will do need
 That old broom, good will be
 The horse is a bike, I already know
 A push on the pedal and it goes

 In that land of freedom
 Clocks, there is no one
 Always ready, a magician will be
 Works his magics only for me

 Today is only Tuesday
 Let's expect Friday
 Tanks today there is no homeworks
 I think I'm going,  I'll go

 When a big man, I will be
 This fine land, I will do see
 When a big man, I will be
Only this I know

Tales in the evening and the noon
 Gnomes and fairies, always around
 Princesses and princes
 Always mysteries to be discovered

 Today is only Tuesday
 Let's expect Friday
 Tanks today there is no homeworks
 I think I'm going,  I'll go
 (I'll go)

 If that land, I should not find
 With my head, I'll build
 And see it around, you will can
 If my glasses, you will wear

 I will grow up, but yet
 A little child, I will stay
 And if you will want to play with me
 There will be two: you and me
 You and me ....
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maxit

uh, and I asked consulting to a dear friend of mine who is child-writer, precious ! Ciao Fabrizio!
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dasilvasings

I'm still listening and I'm liking it, but the volume of your right hand should be higher. I understand there's a lot going on, but it is too low in the mix.

Like the lyrics, and I almost understand the Italian ;-)

The final verses are great. Is that your voice?
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maxit

thanks, dasilva! it is my voice, but sooooft (pianissimo), cause was at night and I didnt want to wake my childs. Yes right hand have to be louder, and maybe voice too? but for now it is a home rec just to share an idea, maybe someday I'll record it...
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Hi Max, lovely happy song to brighten up and bring some warmth into our lives on a rather cold and dismal monday. Great story..............Willie
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thetworegs

Quote from: dasilvasings on December 05, 2011, 03:34:14 AMThe final verses are great.
the whole track is great but like Dasilvasings  says those final verses stand out....... bravo
   
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