"Helena" FINISHED

[indierik]

Your song is beautiful! I love the melody. Writing a simple, yet beautiful, song can sometimes be the most difficult thing to do in music.... I can't do it.

I'm sorry to hear about your lose.

[bydle]

Now I like it even more. Great job!!

[Oldrottenhead]

beautiful song, even tho i dont understand a word, the feeling in the voice still speaks to me.

music the universal language.

[xicpanad]

Here is the final version of the music. Credits for "mr2cool" for adding some bass to this. NOW i´m satisfied with it  .
Thanks to you all.
Cheers

For the most curious ones, here´s a translation (or kind of) for english.
It´s not very accurate translation cause i can´t find the right words in english to make this better, but anyway it shows the message perfectly.
It also might not sound so poetic, but it´s all do to the translation. I tried not to change the lyrics to much.


I´ve already said goodbye to your eyes
Baby you can go now
your tiny hands, where I could always touch
and they used to made me smile

i just wanted to know
where you´ll gonna be
wished that I knew how
to make you come back
make you smile
make you feel
see you come back
see you smile
see you feel
seeeeeeeee you

Every single night i will try to find
for an only single reason
that can tell me why your tiny little heart
doesn´t show his bright no more

when I wake up I dream
in seeing you again
by my side sleeping
and see you smile
see you come back
see you feel
make you come back
make you smile
make you feel
seeeeeee you...

[Greeny]

Beautifully done, and the bass completes it. There's some real emotion here - and that's a universal langauge.

[SE]

 Loved the vocal, loved the simplicity great song

[BossMicroBRew]

Excellent work.  I really enjoyed listening to this one.