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Started by maxit, November 21, 2011, 02:36:39 AM

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This time

This time, don't be shy
This time, close your eyes
This time, let you fly
This time, just cross the line
And let the things just happen
In a while,  this time,  this time

Yes I know you've been lonesome
But i've been too
If you don't know who you really are
I'll give yourself back to you
And I know you'll been hiding
Yes I have been too
If you have lost your way to home
I think I'll just be lost with you but

But this time, don't take your time
This time, just close your eyes
This time, don't be shy
This time, just cross the line
And let the things just happen
In a while, this time, is for your
Life...

This time, close your eyes
This time, let you fly
This time, don't take your time
This time, don't wonder why
And let the things just happen
In a while, this time this time
Is for your
Life...

yea, think that's the record using the words "this time" in a song (this one is not in the count cause it's outside the lyrics ;-)

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andy casson

ah Max 'this time' you produced a lovely song, very sensitive delivery, loved the chord progressions, and the slide guitar, but the melody really stands out fro me, just fantastic! Loved it! I posted a song the began every line with 'Never' which I thought a bit much, but this works really well

andy

 

maxit

#2
yes I well remember that song from yours. thank you, here's the chords (I love them too):


Tuning : E A D G B E    Time Signature: 4/4

|       |       |       |        |       |       |       |        
|--------------------------------|0---------------4---------------|
|--------------------------------|0---------------4---------------|
|--------------------------------|1---------------6---------------|
|--------------------------------|4---------------6---------------|
|--------------------------------|2---------------4---------------|
|--------------------------------|0-------------------------------|

|       |       |       |        |       |       |       |        
|0---------------0---------------|0---------------4---------------|
|0---------------0---------------|0---------------4---------------|
|2---------------2---------------|1---------------6---------------|
|2---------------4---------------|4---------------6---------------|
|0---------------4---------------|2---------------4---------------|
|----------------2---------------|0-------------------------------|

|       |       |       |        |       |       |       |        
|0---------------0---------------|4---------------4---------------|
|0---------------0---------------|5---------------5---------------|
|2---------------2---------------|6---------------5---------------|
|2---------------4---------------|6---------------6---------------|
|0---------------4---------------|4---------------4---------------|
|----------------2---------------|--------------------------------|

|       |       |       |        |       |       |       |        
|4---------------4---------------|0---------------0---------------|
|5---------------5---------------|3---------------7---------------|
|4---------------4---------------|5---------------5---------------|
|6---------------6---------------|5---------------7---------------|
|4---------------4---------------|--------------------------------|
|--------------------------------|5---------------7---------------|

|       |       |       |        |       |       |       |        
|0---------------4---------------|0---------------0---------------|
|0---------------4---------------|0---------------0---------------|
|1---------------6---------------|2---------------2---------------|
|4---------------6---------------|2---------------4---------------|
|2---------------4---------------|0---------------4---------------|
|0-------------------------------|----------------2---------------|

|       |       |       |        |       |       |       |        
|--------------------------------|--------------------------------|
|--------------------------------|--------------------------------|
|--------------------------------|--------------------------------|
|--------------------------------|--------------------------------|
|--------------------------------|--------------------------------|
|--------------------------------|--------------------------------|

secondo finale  |       |        |       |       |       |        
|4---------------4---------------|4---------------4---------------|
|5---------------5---------------|5---------------5---------------|
|6---------------5---------------|4---------------4---------------|
|6---------------6---------------|6---------------6---------------|
|4---------------4---------------|4---------------4---------------|
|--------------------------------|--------------------------------|

|       |       |       |        |       |       |       |        
|0---------------0---------------|0---------------0---------------|
|3---------------3---------------|3---------------3---------------|
|5---------------5---------------|5---------------5---------------|
|5---------------5---------------|5---------------5---------------|
|--------------------------------|--------------------------------|
|5---------------5---------------|5---------------5---------------|

|       |       |       |        |       |       |       |        
|0---------------0---------------|0---------------0---------------|
|5---------------5---------------|5---------------5---------------|
|6---------------6---------------|6---------------6---------------|
|7---------------7---------------|7---------------7---------------|
|--------------------------------|--------------------------------|
|7---------------7---------------|7---------------7---------------|

|       |       |       |        |       |       |       |        
|--------------------------------|0---------------0---------------|
|--------------------------------|0---------------0---------------|
|--------------------------------|9---------------8---------------|
|--------------------------------|9---------------9---------------|
|--------------------------------|9---------------9---------------|
|--------------------------------|0---------------0---------------|

|       |       |       |        |       |       |       |        
|0---------------0---------------|0---------------0---------------|
|0---------------0---------------|0---------------0---------------|
|6---------------6---------------|2---------------2---------------|
|7---------------6---------------|2---------------2---------------|
|9---------------9---------------|0---------------4---------------|
|0---------------0---------------|----------------2---------------|

|       |       |       |        |       |       |       |        
|0---------------0---------------|0---------------0---------------|
|0---------------0---------------|0---------------0---------------|
|1---------------4---------------|6---------------9---------------|
|4---------------4---------------|6---------------9---------------|
|2---------------5---------------|7---------------9---------------|
|0---------------3---------------|5---------------0---------------|

|       |       |       |        
|--------------------------------|
|--------------------------------|
|--------------------------------|
|--------------------------------|
|--------------------------------|
|--------------------------------|


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andy casson

blimey Max, there's diminished Minors and Add9's and everything in there, gonna sit down later with the accoustic and have a good old nose! You may have guessed such chords do not usually (I mean never) get played by me, in originals or otherwise (actually I lie - Little Wing! Yes!)

cheers
andy

Oldrottenhead

this is gorgeous max and i love that chord progression too, braw tell your maw or should i say

dica la vostra madre che è molto buono
whit goes oan in ma heid



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Oldrottenhead
"In order to compose, all you need to do is remember a tune that nobody else has thought of."
- Robert Schumann

andy casson

e 'a tuo padre che è molto buono

google...love it...sometimes

Redler

So beautiful, maxit!! Your voice and guitar is perfect combination! The lead gtr is fine on the backround!

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not only a great song but some of us are learning basic italiano.

anyone here parliamoglesga
whit goes oan in ma heid



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Bunkbeds

Honker

Nevermet

Longhair
Tigers

Oldrottenhead
"In order to compose, all you need to do is remember a tune that nobody else has thought of."
- Robert Schumann

Geir

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Oh well ........

lg

Max this is truly a beauty!
Love the chord progressions...But, what got me the most was the beautiful use of
the slide guitar!
Bravo!

LG
nothing is real... So theres nothing to get hung about!