Bed Head - remixed

[vigwig]

My sons laugh at my songs and routinely offer suggestions. One of those suggestions was "Dad, you need to make one that has a steady beat."  So I re-tooled this one to give it a steadier beat and added some vocals.  It contains a break I've used before and is a steady subject:  Who hasn't had a bed head?  (remixed 10-26-11)

[SwanSong]

Hey and nice to see u on songcrafters..definately a nice beat
and ur son was right on the money . good vox. mix could improve
CHeers Neil !

[andy casson]

This is very cool, great beat, great subject, and don't worry about your kids laughing at you...it is every dads job to embaress their kids whichever way possible - I once sang 'what would you do if I sang out of tune' to one of my daughters friends, she replied 'I'd leave' and walked off... I was a broken man

Cool song, and I think the steadier beat is a good idea...but don't tell your sons that
andy

[vigwig]

Yeah, I messed up on the beat and the project file is lost, so I can't fix it, I just have to live with it.  Thanks for the honest critique.  It is a good concept handled a little loosely, I'm afraid.  Thanks for the affirmation on behalf of all dads.  I once had someone say "You're gonna hate me but this sounds ugly."  Many of my friends don't get it. I come here to get a few kind words.  Vic

[Kenny B]

Sounds like good fun stuff to me.  I dig it!!!

One of those suggestions was "Dad, you need to make one that has a steady beat." 

My response would be ...  "Why?  Anyone can make one with a steady beat!!!"   

Cool stuff!!!

Kenny B.

[Flash Harry]

This is great. I love the 'Steady beat'

I no longer get bed head, but I do get this. Good stuff....

[Rata-tat-tat]

Crazy as always... Way to go Vic.

[Ferryman_1957]

I love what's going on in the background and that steady beat, I'd bring them up in the mix a bit because you lose the power of that beat a bit because the vocals are quite loud. Great fun and I love that change at about 1:40.

Cheers,

Nigel

[vigwig]

Finally! I found the project file and hopefully mixed it a little better.  Re-mixing a cold file is awfully hard.
Vic